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Re: GMAT PREP SC21

by iamcste » Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:57 pm
poonam1279 wrote:Need help with this
B

A rise-make ----Incorrect
Singular subject tale singr verbs

Eliminate C and D

Rising interest rates-makes . Eliminate A

In correct ..Plural subject..plural verb

E-"It" is ambiguous and "to be" is wordy

Actually, There are more errors but these much must be suff to get the correct ans
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by acecoolan » Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:57 pm
IMO B
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by vittalgmat » Mon Dec 08, 2008 12:26 am
B is short, sweet and retains the original meaning.

The original sentence is wordy; it is ambiguous.
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by ronniecoleman » Mon Dec 08, 2008 3:04 am
IMO B
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by deepamohn » Mon Dec 08, 2008 9:26 am
Its B.
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by poonam1279 » Wed Dec 10, 2008 12:42 pm
OA is B
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by maihuna » Sun Dec 28, 2008 5:25 am
crucial thing to note is:

make vs makes
and rising interest rates make
a rise in interest rate make...

a rise ( ) makes
rising interest rates make...
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