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Annual Stockholders meeting

by ani781 » Sun Oct 06, 2013 7:35 am
At the annual stockholders meeting, investors heard a presentation on the numerous
challenges facing the company, including among them the threat from a rival's
multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for
the company's
powerful microprocessor chip.
A. including among them the threat from a rival's multibillion-dollar patentinfringement
suit and the declining sales for
B. which includes the threat of a rival's multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit
and declining sales of
C. included among these the threat from a rival's multibillion-dollar patentinfringement
suit as well as a decline in sales for
D. among them the threat of a rival's multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and
the decline in sales of
E. among these the threat from a rival's multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit
as well as the decline in sales for


I somehow don't understand why on earth , D , is not creating a comma splice.
This option sounds too too odd to be true. Can someone please help me hear it in a different way ? Plss...
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by theCodeToGMAT » Sun Oct 06, 2013 7:45 am
{A} - INCORRECT; Parallelism issue;
{B} - INCORRECT; Parallelism Issue
{C} - INCORRECT; "as well as" is awkward usage for "among"
{D} - CORRECT
{E} - INCORRECT; "as well as" is awkward usage for "among"

Is the Answer [spoiler]{D}[/spoiler]

Sometimes ODD Answers are correct.. Look for grammatical, logical & Meaning issue.. "among them .. " seems to be appositive..
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by ani781 » Sun Oct 06, 2013 7:51 am
Thanks Rahul,
Can you pls explain what parallelism issue you see here with the options A & B ?

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by vinay1983 » Sun Oct 06, 2013 8:15 am
ani781 wrote:At the annual stockholders meeting, investors heard a presentation on the numerous
challenges facing the company, including among them the threat from a rival's
multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for
the company's
powerful microprocessor chip.
A. including among them the threat from a rival's multibillion-dollar patentinfringement
suit and the declining sales for
B. which includes the threat of a rival's multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit
and declining sales of
C. included among these the threat from a rival's multibillion-dollar patentinfringement
suit as well as a decline in sales for
D. among them the threat of a rival's multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and
the decline in sales of
E. among these the threat from a rival's multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit
as well as the decline in sales for


I somehow don't understand why on earth , D , is not creating a comma splice.
This option sounds too too odd to be true. Can someone please help me hear it in a different way ? Plss...
This question is a good example of "reading the non-underlined part" saying. "the company's powerful microprocessor chips" needs "of" before it. Only options B and D have it.

B-Which has no precedent-Reject
D-Aah!One of those option that is strange!"among them" modifies "numerous" so correct.

A-"including" is wrong usage and "sales for " No-No
C-"included" again is wrong.Also the beginning of the sentence is not palatable
E-"among these" needs "are" also "for" is wrong
You can, for example never foretell what any one man will do, but you can say with precision what an average number will be up to!

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by theCodeToGMAT » Sun Oct 06, 2013 8:26 am
ani781 wrote:Thanks Rahul,
Can you pls explain what parallelism issue you see here with the options A & B ?
The explanation may seem confusing..

{A} - the threat from...........and the declining sales for
"the threat" --> Complex Gerund
"the declining sales" --> Complex Gerund
By rule: Complex Gerund should be parallel to Complex Gerund.
However, "declining" has an appropriate Action Noun "Decline" so avoid making complex gerund with ING

{B} - the threat ...............and declining sales of
"the threat" --> Complex Gerund
"declining sales of" --> Simple Gerund
By rule: Complex Gerund cannot be parallel to Simple Gerund

If all this looks confusing.. then just follow the blind parallelism here..
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by Mission2012 » Sun Oct 06, 2013 9:34 am
theCodeToGMAT wrote:
ani781 wrote:Thanks Rahul,
Can you pls explain what parallelism issue you see here with the options A & B ?
The explanation may seem confusing..

{A} - the threat from...........and the declining sales for
"the threat" --> Complex Gerund
"the declining sales" --> Complex Gerund
By rule: Complex Gerund should be parallel to Complex Gerund.
However, "declining" has an appropriate Action Noun "Decline" so avoid making complex gerund with ING

{B} - the threat ...............and declining sales of
"the threat" --> Complex Gerund
"declining sales of" --> Simple Gerund
By rule: Complex Gerund cannot be parallel to Simple Gerund

If all this looks confusing.. then just follow the blind parallelism here..
Great answer Rahul.
"The threat" (a noun) and "declining sales of" (simple grund).
GMAT does't like Noun and simple gerunds to be parallel.

Also in option D, there is no issue with comma as "among them the threat of a rival's multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of " is a prepositional phrase.
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by [email protected] » Sun Oct 06, 2013 3:41 pm
Hi All,

This SC begins by mentioning "the numerous challenges facing the company", so we're looking for grammar that matches the idea that the "challenges" existed yesterday, exist today and probably will exist tomorrow...

There are 2 ways to do this that are simple/direct:

1) The word "including"
2) The phrase "among them"

You won't use both (that would be redundant) and you likely won't add any words (that would also be redundant).

Answer A: Uses both; Eliminate
Answer B: Uses "which"; Eliminate
Answer C: Uses both/"included" (which is past tense); Eliminate
Answer D: Looks good.
Answer E: Possible, but I'm suspicious of "among THESE"

There are a number of reasons to choose D over E:
1) The idiom "threat of"
2) The idiom "sales of"
3) The parallelism of "threat of" and "sales of"
4) The word "and" is more to the point than "as well as"

Final Answer: D

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by Mission2012 » Sun Oct 06, 2013 8:31 pm
[email protected] wrote:Hi All,

This SC begins by mentioning "the numerous challenges facing the company", so we're looking for grammar that matches the idea that the "challenges" existed yesterday, exist today and probably will exist tomorrow...
How did this help you to eliminate choices?
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by [email protected] » Sun Oct 06, 2013 10:51 pm
Hi Mission2012,

I actually explain how I eliminated answers A, B and C using that rule. Keep reading under that phrase and you'll notice the 2 options that would be correct and what appears in each of the 5 answers (and why I eliminated the ones that I did).

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