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by nafiul9090 » Mon Oct 01, 2012 1:22 am
An aggressive campaign by Turkey to reclaim antiquities it says were looted has led in recent months to the return of an ancient sphinx and many golden treasures from the region's rich past. But it has also drawn condemnation from some of the world's largest museums, which call the campaign cultural blackmail.

is it necessary to use punctuation in the bold faced sentence???
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by Jim@StratusPrep » Mon Oct 01, 2012 4:29 am
nope.... it says were looted is a little shaky

You could put commas around 'in recent months' to make the sentence a bit clearer.
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by EducationAisle » Mon Oct 01, 2012 5:20 am
commas around "it says were looted" could also bring more reading clarity...though it seems unlikely that you will get this kind of construct on GMAT.
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