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by radhika1306 » Tue Sep 18, 2007 7:49 am
Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both
rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in
many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
A. Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted
B. Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both
C. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted
D. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted
E. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both


can someone provide an explaination 2
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by optimisticsam » Tue Sep 18, 2007 8:00 am
Going with D on this.

Modifier needs to be near what it modifies (in this case Mr. Monk).

Also, need "that"

Correct?
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by radhika1306 » Tue Sep 18, 2007 8:47 am
Correct thanks
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by varundaga05 » Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:56 pm
Can someone explain it a bit more
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by varundaga05 » Mon Jun 28, 2010 10:01 pm
Its from one of the response from Stacey. Using it here for reference

BOTH (rooted in the stride piano tradition of Wilie) AND (Duke)
The X and Y are represented by the parentheses, but these two things aren't parallel. You'd need something more like "work rooted in the stride piano tradition of BOTH (Wilie) AND (Duke)" - though that's only one way to fix this. Another way is to remove the BOTH idiom entirely (which is what this one appears to do).
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