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Can noun in modifier be referred with pronoun in main claus?

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by kisna_428 » Sun Nov 03, 2013 1:25 am
Can noun in modifier be referred with pronoun in main clause ?
Example
Rome was threatened by Hunnish troops which , led by Attila the Hun, demonstrated his military superiority.
Is ,which is absolutely necessary ?

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by theCodeToGMAT » Sun Nov 03, 2013 5:54 am
Can you please post the complete question.. I believe "his" is incorrect.. "their" was correct usage.
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by kisna_428 » Sun Nov 03, 2013 7:31 am
Rome was threatened by Hunnish troops which , led by Attila the Hun, demonstrated their military superiority.
Is the complete sentence, but I wanted to know whether his can be used instead of their if we don't have to about meaning change?
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by theCodeToGMAT » Sun Nov 03, 2013 9:12 am
kisna_428 wrote:Rome was threatened by Hunnish troops which , led by Attila the Hun, demonstrated their military superiority.
Is the complete sentence, but I wanted to know whether his can be used instead of their if we don't have to about meaning change?
No, we cannot refer to modifier like that.
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