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by njain11 » Mon Sep 22, 2008 11:38 am
help !
) Robert,who is actually quite honest and not having the inclination to rob anyone,nevertheless thinks about crime and fashion.

a) not having the inclination to rob anyone,nevertheless thinks about crime and fashion.
b) not inclined to rob anyone,nevertheless thinks about crime and fashion.
c) who is not having the inclination to rob anyone,nevertheless thinks about crime and fashion.
d) who is not inclined to rob anyone,nevertheless thinks about crime and fashion.
e) is not having the inclination to rob anyone,nevertheless thinks about crime and fashion
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by niraj_a » Mon Sep 22, 2008 11:48 am
B..
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by s_kaks » Tue Sep 23, 2008 12:22 am
IMO B
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by vivek.kapoor83 » Tue Sep 23, 2008 12:32 am
imo b
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by stop@800 » Tue Sep 23, 2008 1:26 am
"who is actually quite honest" will be parallel to
"who is not inclined to rob" and also to
"not inclined to rob" [it is parallel to "quite honest"]

B is shorter hence the answer.
Rest all breaks the rule of parallelism.
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by nikhilagrawal » Tue Sep 23, 2008 2:37 am
why not D
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by LifetimesofSC » Tue Sep 23, 2008 6:27 am
B is correct


D is incorrect as it uses ''who'' twice- the 2nd ''who'' is unnecessary.
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by amitabhprasad » Tue Sep 23, 2008 5:03 pm
I will go with "D"
as it says who ... and who...., there by keeping the rule of parallelism.
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by GmatKiss » Sat Oct 08, 2011 1:44 am
Between B and D
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