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by mundasingh123 » Wed Jul 06, 2011 10:16 pm
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Hi bRian had this law been enacted , would the use of "will " have been justified ?
Yes! Because at that point the law WILL do something:

The new budget, passed yesterday by Congress, will devote twice as much funding to...

The recently-passed law will require all citizens to...

At the point that the law is definite, its results "will" be what they are. But if it's proposed, then "would" is better because it's still uncertain.
Just to confirm , do i take it as a rule ,then , that if a law has been enacted , "will" is to be used
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by mirantdon » Thu Jul 07, 2011 4:08 am
Thanks a lot Brian . I picked B too . !

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by Brian@VeritasPrep » Thu Jul 07, 2011 8:40 am
Hey mundasingh,

Yes...with a caveat - it's not a 100% absolute rule because there are bound to be some logical uses of would, like:

Pundits predicted that the law would never make it through both houses of Congress, but in actuality it passed quite easily.

Here the law itself has been passed, but "would" is logical because it's a past/conditional usage.

So...in the context that we've been discussing it, you're absolutely right, but be careful and keep logic in mind when you see situations like this in the future. I'd advocate paying attention to the differences between answer choices when it comes to meaning and not only looking for what you expect to see. The GMAT is pretty slick about subtle-but-definitely-illogical meaning differences, and to me they're a lot easier to spot in context, one versus the other, than they are to anticipate well in advance.
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by mundasingh123 » Thu Jul 07, 2011 8:52 am
Pundits predicted that the law would never make it through both houses of Congress, but in actuality it passed quite easily.

Here the law itself has been passed, but "would" is logical because it's a past/conditional usage.
Hi Brian so at the time the pundits must have predicted , " The law will never make it through ... "
Since the sentence is reporting some event in the past , the future tense is changed to conditional

when we are reporting past events such as the one you have spoken about in the example above , do we never bring in issues of hypothetical situations.
What i means is "dont we use "would" because the pundits predicted that something will hold true but in fact the event doesnt hold take place .
Basically i am mixing issues of Hypothetical aspect of would with the conditional aspect of would
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by rishijhawar » Sat Jul 09, 2011 4:29 am
Brian, i still feel the usage of will is ok as the word "proposed" takes care of the uncertainty of what would happen.
Please correct me if i am wrong.

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by blackjack » Sat Jul 09, 2011 5:27 am
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Brian@VeritasPrep wrote:Hey mundasingh,

Thanks for the PM! Interesting - you know...I wonder how well-written this question is in a GMAT context. Everyone's saying 'B' but my first thought on this is that "would" should be better than "will" because it's a "proposed" law, so we don't know for sure that anything WILL happen...just what WOULD happen if the law does, indeed, come to fruition. And that would eliminate B (and C).

I'd say that E, then, has an awkward meaning with "repeal AND modify" laws, since once it's repealed it's gone...there's nothing left to modify. So "OR" in A and D is preferable. I'd say that they're probably going for A...I don't even know that I'm completely against the idiom in D like so many are, but the meaning is a little off. They're not repealing these tax breaks to directly lower tax rates...that's a different step altogether. So the phrasing "so that tax rates could be lowered across the board", by introducing another verb, seems more logical with the intended meaning.

So that's my explanation for A... As with any practice problem the process is probably much more important than the result, so hopefully the logic makes sense. I know that my answer contradicts the supposed "OA" but I'm pretty confident in the process here on this question...
Hi Brian,

Request you to clarify on one thing i.e can would & could used in the same sentence????? please share the examples for such usage
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I have the same doubt. Would and could in the same sentence???????

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by rishijhawar » Mon Jul 11, 2011 10:00 pm
Brian, i still feel the usage of will is ok as the word "proposed" takes care of the uncertainty of what would happen.
Please correct me if i am wrong.

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by rishijhawar » Mon Jul 11, 2011 10:21 pm
Brian, thanks for great explanation on "so as to". However, I still have a doubt:
If i understood your explanation correctly, there must be a direct cause effect relationship to ensure correct usage of so as to.
i think this is what you meant in your example" "I put on boots (CAUSE) so as to keep my feet dry (EFFECT) while hiking.
Going by the same logic, can't we derive the following:
I repealed tax breaks (CAUSE) so as to lower taxes across the board (EFFECT).
I agree with your explanation, but just curious to make sure that I understood 100% so as to answer the usage correctly on test day.

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by sahilchaudhary » Tue Oct 01, 2013 11:14 am
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