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by gmat_perfect » Fri Mar 18, 2011 3:21 am
With surface temperatures estimated at minus 230 degrees Farenheit, Jupiter's moon Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, and with 60 square miles of water thought to be frozen from top to bottom

A) Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, and with
B) Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, its
C) Europa has long been considered as far too cold to support life and has
D) Europa, long considered as far too cold to support life, and its
E) Europa, long considered to be far too cold to support life, and to have

Please explain every option.

Why the wrong options are wrong.
Why the correct option is correct.
What is the logic behind the correct option's grammar.

Thanks.
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by vineeshp » Fri Mar 18, 2011 3:24 am
Is the OA C? That is the only one that seems parallel and unawkward to me.
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by HSPA » Fri Mar 18, 2011 4:06 am
B it shall be

C) D) E) idiom error (consider)
A) close one but A is not complete
with 60square miles of X what is happening??

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by AIM GMAT » Fri Mar 18, 2011 5:00 am
C , D and E are out b'coz consider as or consider to be -- unidiomatic

A lacks parallelism , it lacks another "has" after and , so its out .

Left with B .

IMO B
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by tetura84 » Fri Mar 18, 2011 5:03 am
gmat_perfect wrote:With surface temperatures estimated at minus 230 degrees Farenheit, Jupiter's moon Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, and with 60 square miles of water thought to be frozen from top to bottom

A) Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, and with
B) Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, its
C) Europa has long been considered as far too cold to support life and has
D) Europa, long considered as far too cold to support life, and its
E) Europa, long considered to be far too cold to support life, and to have

Please explain every option.

Why the wrong options are wrong.
Why the correct option is correct.
What is the logic behind the correct option's grammar.

Thanks.

A = and joins two independent clauses, but where is the subject in the second clause?
C = same issue as A
D and E
"long considered as far too cold to support life" = this is appositive, use of COMMA+and is wrong here.

IMO B
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by aspirant2011 » Fri Mar 18, 2011 7:57 am
i would also go with B

C,D & E are using wrong idiom
A wrong because of no subject in the clause starting from "and" and moreover i am doubtful on planet possessing anything, therefore the use of "with" in the sentence.............

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by GMATMadeEasy » Fri Mar 18, 2011 10:11 am
B can not be the answer. the noun modifier in B '60 square miles of water ' is supposed to modify subject that is too far from it.

C is correct and 'consider as ' is NOT ALWAYS wrong. In addition,by making second part 'has 60 square miles ..' as part of main clause modifier 'With surface temperatures estimated ... ' . correctly applie to this. because of too low temperatue, huge part is thought to be frozen.

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by gmat_perfect » Fri Mar 18, 2011 11:33 am
any more thought on this one?

Thanks.

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by atulmangal » Sat Mar 19, 2011 12:10 am
Its a good question. The ans is B...

The concept of ABSOLUTE PHRASE

Definition:
A group of words that modifies an independent clause as a whole.

An absolute is made up of a noun and its modifiers. It may precede, follow, or interrupt the main clause:
The underlined portions are ABSOLUTE PHRASES

Their slender bodies sleek and black against the orange sky, the storks circled high above us.
The storks circled high above us, their slender bodies sleek and black against the orange sky.
The storks, their slender bodies sleek and black against the orange sky, circled high above us.

NOTE:-- The answer choice contains absolute phrase is almost always correct.
Here are some tips regarding ABSOLUTE PHRASES, i got from internet.

1.
Recognize absolute phrases when you see and use them. An absolute phrase is a modifier that looks like a complete sentence, but with the auxiliary verb (a form of "be," "have" or "do") missing and sometimes with an implied pronoun. For example, both "her book in hand" and "feet tapping the floor" are absolute phrases.

2
Understand when to use absolute phrases. Absolute phrases help you create a clear relationship between ideas, adding information to your original observation. For example, you could write, "She curled up in bed." Then if you wanted to add information to that idea, you could create another sentence or you could use an absolute phrase as a modifier by writing, "Her book in hand, she curled up in bed." The absolute phrase efficiently combines these two ideas.

3
Know where to put an absolute phrase in a sentence. Its placement is flexible. You can start a sentence with one, as in the example in Step 2. You can end a sentence with one: "He ran to the river, his feet barely missing the sharp rocks that lined the path." Or you can interrupt the subject and verb by putting an absolute phrase between them: "Heather, heels clicking on the pavement, ran after the bus."

Now, i hope you can understand that in Answer choice B, "Its....." is working as an absolute phrase..as per definition, its modifying a complete independent clause...Plus starting with a pronoun...

MORE EXAMPLES OF ABSOLUTE PHRASES

1. Joan looked nervous, her fears creeping up on her.
2. Tom paled when he came home, his mother standing in the doorway.
3. John, his arms flailing in the wind, called out desperately for help.
4. The car fell in the lake, the cold water filling the compartment.
5. She returned to her bench, her face showing all the unhappiness that had suddenly overtaken her.
6. The boy watched, his eyes bulging in the dark.
7. About the bones, ants were ebbing away, their pincers full of meat.
8. Six boys came over the hill half an hour early that afternoon, running hard, their heads down, their
forearms working, their breath whistling.

9. The good dogs came stiffly out of their little houses, hackles up and deep growls in their throats.
10. Noiselessly Lenny appeared in the open doorway and stood there looking in, his big shoulders nearly
filling the opening.

11. His head aching, his throat sore, he forgot to light the cigarette.
12. Miss Hearne, her face burning, hardly listened to these words.
13. Light flickered on bits of ruby glass and on sensitive capillary hairs in the nylon-brushed nostrils of the creature that quivered gently, gently, its eight legs spidered under it on rubber-padded paws.

Observe the example no 7 and 13 and try to relate with Option B

Hopes this helps...
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by atulmangal » Sat Mar 19, 2011 12:15 am
I thought to share more information:

One more question on absolute phrase from OG Verbal 2, hope this may help.

Sound can travel through water for enormous distances, prevented from dissipating its acoustic energy as a result of boundaries in the ocean created by water layers of different temperatures and densities.
A. prevented from dissipating its acoustic energy as a result of
B. prevented from having its acoustic energy dissipated by
C. its acoustic energy prevented from dissipating by
D. its acoustic energy prevented from being dissipated as a result of
E. preventing its acoustic energy from dissipating by

solve this question first and then check this OA C
Again note:- absolute phrases lack the verb "to be"

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by AIM GMAT » Sat Mar 19, 2011 12:25 am
Gr8 work atulmangal , the example really helped to gather the concept . Thanks for compiling in the useful info .
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by edvhou812 » Sat Mar 19, 2011 5:41 pm
gmat_perfect wrote:With surface temperatures estimated at minus 230 degrees Farenheit, Jupiter's moon Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, and with 60 square miles of water thought to be frozen from top to bottom

A) Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, and with
B) Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, its
C) Europa has long been considered as far too cold to support life and has
D) Europa, long considered as far too cold to support life, and its
E) Europa, long considered to be far too cold to support life, and to have

Please explain every option.

Why the wrong options are wrong.
Why the correct option is correct.
What is the logic behind the correct option's grammar.

Thanks.
I picked C

D and E were awkward.

Although "as far" seemed confusing to me, I chose "C" as my answer since it is the only remaining option that correctly uses "has" to talk about the frozen water.

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by atulmangal » Sat Mar 19, 2011 6:04 pm
edvhou812 wrote:
gmat_perfect wrote:With surface temperatures estimated at minus 230 degrees Farenheit, Jupiter's moon Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, and with 60 square miles of water thought to be frozen from top to bottom

A) Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, and with
B) Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, its
C) Europa has long been considered as far too cold to support life and has
D) Europa, long considered as far too cold to support life, and its
E) Europa, long considered to be far too cold to support life, and to have

Please explain every option.

Why the wrong options are wrong.
Why the correct option is correct.
What is the logic behind the correct option's grammar.

Thanks.
I picked C

D and E were awkward.

Although "as far" seemed confusing to me, I chose "C" as my answer since it is the only remaining option that correctly uses "has" to talk about the frozen water.
In C, "considered as" is not the correct idiom, correct idiom is CONSIDER X,Y

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by edvhou812 » Sat Mar 19, 2011 6:13 pm
atulmangal wrote:
edvhou812 wrote:
gmat_perfect wrote:With surface temperatures estimated at minus 230 degrees Farenheit, Jupiter's moon Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, and with 60 square miles of water thought to be frozen from top to bottom

A) Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, and with
B) Europa has long been considered far too cold to support life, its
C) Europa has long been considered as far too cold to support life and has
D) Europa, long considered as far too cold to support life, and its
E) Europa, long considered to be far too cold to support life, and to have

Please explain every option.

Why the wrong options are wrong.
Why the correct option is correct.
What is the logic behind the correct option's grammar.

Thanks.
I picked C

D and E were awkward.

Although "as far" seemed confusing to me, I chose "C" as my answer since it is the only remaining option that correctly uses "has" to talk about the frozen water.
In C, "considered as" is not the correct idiom, correct idiom is CONSIDER X,Y
Yeah, it sucks to be wrong. Thanks for pointing out the correct idiom though. :)

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