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Real estate

by chidcguy » Sat Jun 21, 2008 2:46 pm
Any real estate professional will tell you that the value of a parcel of a land is most directly affected by the extent of its development and how close it is to a major business,

A)

B)whether it has been developed extensively

C) How extensively it has developed

D) the extent to which it has developed

E) How extensively it has been developed
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Re: Real estate

by duke » Sat Jun 21, 2008 7:10 pm
chidcguy wrote:Any real estate professional will tell you that the value of a parcel of a land is most directly affected by the extent of its development and how close it is to a major business,

A)

B)whether it has been developed extensively

C) How extensively it has developed

D) the extent to which it has developed

E) How extensively it has been developed
E sounds best. Firstly looked for a parallel with "how close". And "it" refers to the parcel of a land...
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by chidcguy » Sat Jun 21, 2008 7:16 pm
C has an it and also is parallel with a how

Why not C?
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by duke » Sat Jun 21, 2008 7:18 pm
chidcguy wrote:C has an it and also is parallel with a how

Why not C?
The parcel of a land can't develop itself. It should be developed (passive voice).
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by chidcguy » Sun Jun 22, 2008 6:53 am
Right on.

I fell for the general real estate verbatim. We keep saying that this area has developed very fast in the last few years. Here its actually parcel of a land and it needs some one to act on it.
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