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by CITI29 » Sun Jul 13, 2008 10:24 am
Even though the state has spent ten years and seven
million dollars planning a reservoir along the Ubi
River, the project will have to be abandoned as a
result of the river becoming so heavily polluted.

(A) will have to be abandoned as a result of the river
(B) is to be abandoned on account of the heavy
pollution which the river received
(C) had to be abandoned because the river had
received such heavy pollution
(D) has to be abandoned because of the river and its
(E) must be abandoned because the river has become
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by reachac » Sun Jul 13, 2008 10:44 am
IMO A.
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by Mahalo » Sun Jul 13, 2008 3:06 pm
(A) and (E) are close as the others have passive/awkward construction.

I prefer (E) over (A).
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by CITI29 » Tue Jul 15, 2008 6:25 am
Ans is 'A'...but i dont understand as why 'E' is not correct. Can someone pls explain
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by ildude02 » Wed Jul 16, 2008 8:38 am
reachac wrote:IMO A.
Can you explain your reson behind the pick. I guess we all narrowed it down to E and A, and for me, A seeemed too wordy and using gerunds(becoming)is always not advisable at best on GMAT. That was the reason I choose E. But I would liek to know what made you pick A, may be there is some hidden reasoning I missed to consider.
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by ildude02 » Wed Jul 16, 2008 8:41 am
CITI29 wrote:Ans is 'A'...but i dont understand as why 'E' is not correct. Can someone pls explain
Is the undeerlined portion correct? Seems like something is missing from the sentence. Some choices such as E, "must be abandoned because the river has become" has become in the corrected choice. But A doesn't have "becoming" in the corrcted choice?. Did you post the chioces properly?
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by sudhir3127 » Thu Jul 17, 2008 2:14 am
My answer is E. to be form should be avoided in gmat.

P.S if this one of the 1000 SC question then the answer is E.
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by gmatinjuly » Thu Jul 17, 2008 2:36 am
guys between a and e

as a result of is same as because .....hence E is more concise....hope this makes sense....
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by codesnooker » Thu Jul 17, 2008 3:38 am
IMO (E) because it is concise.
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by bigfernhead » Thu Jul 17, 2008 6:23 am
IMO A (even though I do like E because it's concise).

My reasoning - I think there's a difference between "as a result of" and "because" in this statement.

What's the OA?
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by kris610 » Sat Jul 19, 2008 10:24 am
I don't think A could be correct. One it is awkward and a gerund is used without a possessive. 'river becoming ' is not correct. If we were to use this, it should be 'river's becoming'. Either way 'becoming' is very awkward and E is much more concise.
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