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by kaulnikhil » Sat Jun 05, 2010 2:26 am
The recent discovery of a red oak tree sap that is anticipated to advance experimentation with natural substances in order to create cancer medicines will be able to provide chemists with a more potent mixture to work from than other trees and at a lower cost.

(A) The recent discovery of a red oak tree sap that is anticipated to advance experimentation with natural substances in order to create cancer medicines will be able to provide chemists with a more potent mixture to work from than other trees and at a lower cost
(B) The recent discovery of a red oak tree sap is anticipated to advance experimentation with natural substances in order to create cancer medicines and will be able to provide chemists with a more potent mixture to work from at a lower cost than the sap extracted from other trees
(C) The recent discovery of a red oak tree sap, which is anticipated to advance experimentation with natural substances in order to create cancer medicines, will be able to provide chemists with a more potent mixture to work from at a lower cost than other trees
(D) A recently discovered red oak tree sap, which is anticipated to advance experimentation with natural substances in order to create cancer medicines, will be able to provide chemists with a more potent mixture to work from than the sap extracted from other trees can, and at a lower cost
(E) A recently discovered red oak tree sap, which is anticipated to advance experimentation with natural substances in order to create cancer medicines, will be able to provide a more potent mixture to work from than other trees and to decrease the cost


[spoiler]Can someone please explain how and at a lower cost in D makes sense after a comma.. I thinkd it cant act alone and hence cannot be right answer.. I understand the other sentences have comparison issues but isn't this a wrong usage of and??? [/spoiler]
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by vijay_venky » Sun Jun 06, 2010 3:58 am
I think this serial or Oxford comma though not used editorially, may not be used as a single feature to rule out an option because the usage is not wrong grammatically wrong, in fact I chose D as my option.

Here in the second half of the sentence we are comparing the sap of the other trees. So I truly believe the subject of the sentence should be sap rather than discovery, this rules out A and B.

Please post the OA.

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by Stacey Koprince » Wed Jun 09, 2010 7:32 am
Received a PM asking me to reply. The person who sent the PM told me that the source of this question is Knewton.

In future, please post the source yourself directly in the thread. Please do not simply tell me the source via PM, because then I have to check myself to see whether it has already been posted and, if not, post it myself. And the more time I spend doing things like that, the less time I have to discuss problems! Thanks. :)

Generally, I do not use commas to narrow down answers on the real test. There are some exceptions for times when a comma absolutely must be used. (For example: "the dog, which has a long tail, was running around in circles." The "which" modifier MUST be set off by commas in that sentence - no question.) But unless it's something that is absolutely 100% a no-exceptions rule, I tend to avoid the commas because the rules are too fuzzy in many instances.

I'm not really a fan of any of the 5 answers here.
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