use of rather in idiom

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use of rather in idiom

by sanjib » Thu Jun 25, 2009 11:45 pm
The argument that the dominant form of family structure today is not the nuclear family, but rather it is a family which is modified and extended, is based on a number of facts: the existence of three-generational families, the amount of vertical and horizontal communication between family subunits, and the extent to which family members offer assistance to one another.
(A) family, but rather it is a family which is modified and extended, is based on a number of facts: the existence of three-generational families
(B) family, but is instead a family that is modified and extended, is based on a number of facts: three-generational families exist
(C) family, which has been modified and extended, is based on a number of facts: the existence of three-generational families
(D) family but a modified extended family is based on a number of facts: the existence of three-generational families
(E) family, but also a modified and extended family, is based on a number of facts: three-generational families exist



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by goelmohit2002 » Fri Jun 26, 2009 12:11 am
IMO "D".....not X....but [rather] Y....

only D follows this paradigm with parallelism.

The argument that the dominant form of family structure today is not the nuclear family, but rather it is a family which is modified and extended, is based on a number of facts: the existence of three-generational families, the amount of vertical and horizontal communication between family subunits, and the extent to which family members offer assistance to one another.
(A) family, but rather it is a family which is modified and extended, is based on a number of facts: the existence of three-generational families
non parallel idiomatic usage.

(B) family, but is instead a family that is modified and extended, is based on a number of facts: three-generational families exist
wrong idiom.

(C) family, which has been modified and extended, is based on a number of facts: the existence of three-generational families
we need to show contrast...."which" more about the noun preceding the same.

(D) family but a modified extended family is based on a number of facts: the existence of three-generational families
Correct.

(E) family, but also a modified and extended family, is based on a number of facts: three-generational families exist
wrong idiom....

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