Outsider art can engage the viewer

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Outsider art can engage the viewer

by darlingriyarai » Sun Nov 25, 2012 1:27 am
Outsider art can engage the viewer at a very primitive and basic level, endures beyond brief perception if the audience is open-minded enough to put aside traditional categories of evaluation.

A. endures beyond brief perception if the audience is open-minded enough

B. enduring beyond brief perceptions if, enough open-minded, the audience is

C. an engagement that endures beyond brief perception if the audience is open-minded enough

D. endure beyond brief perceptions if the audience is open-minded enough

E. which endure beyond brief perceptions if open-minded audiences have enough
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by patanjali.purpose » Sun Nov 25, 2012 3:17 am
darlingriyarai wrote:Outsider art can engage the viewer at a very primitive and basic level, endures beyond brief perception if the audience is open-minded enough to put aside traditional categories of evaluation.

A. endures beyond brief perception if the audience is open-minded enough

B. enduring beyond brief perceptions if, enough open-minded, the audience is

C. an engagement that endures beyond brief perception if the audience is open-minded enough

D. endure beyond brief perceptions if the audience is open-minded enough

E. which endure beyond brief perceptions if open-minded audiences have enough
A - Improper connection of verbs ENGAGE and ENDURES; ideally ENDURING should be used to act as a modifier to preceding clause
B - WHAT does ENOUGH OPEN-MINDED modify; IMO object of IS is AN INFINITIVE (AUDIENCE is compared with TO PUT); not sensible
D- Same as A
e - WHICH refers to LEVEL (not logical); also ENDURE should hv been ENDURES

C

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