BREAKING: Target Test Prep releases Brand New 2026 On Demand GMAT prep course

Redeem

OG12-SC135-Spanning more than 50 years

This topic has expert replies
Post new topic Locked
Previous Topic Next Topic
User avatar
Legendary Member
Posts: 1893
Joined: Sun May 30, 2010 11:48 pm
Thanked: 215 times
Followed by:7 members

OG12-SC135-Spanning more than 50 years

by kvcpk » Mon Jul 12, 2010 10:36 pm
Hi All,

Please read this before posting your reply.

Source of this question is OG-12. This question might have been discussed in BTG already. The very reason I am posting again is to approach SC in a structured way. Hence, I request everyone to post their comments in the following manner.

IMO: A/B/C/D/E

Approach/Steps used for choosing the right answer.

For other options, List the errors associated in the following style:
Option: A/B/C/D/E
Subject-Verb Agreement : NA
Parallelism: NA
Pronouns: NA
Modifiers: NA
Verb Tense:NA
Voice and Mood:NA
Comparisons:NA
Idioms:NA
Meaning/Conciseness:NA
Others:NA

This definitely takes a bit more time and effort. But it will help a lot of students to master OG questions/strategies. We need to know the best approach to solve these. It is equally important to know why the wrong answers are wrong. Explanation for each option will detail that out. Plan is to compile all these threads to a single place for future reference. Hope everyone agrees with me!!

Spanning more than 50 years, Friedrich Müller began his career in an unpromising apprenticeship as a Sanskrit scholar and culminated in virtually every honor that European governments and learned societies could bestow.
(A) Müller began his career in an unpromising apprenticeship as
(B) Müller's career began in an unpromising apprenticeship as
(C) Müller's career began with the unpromising apprenticeship of being
(D) Müller had begun his career with the unpromising apprenticeship of being
(E) the career of Müller has begun with an unpromising apprenticeship of

OA B

Expecting active participation and do Let me know your thoughts!!
Top
Source: — Sentence Correction |
User avatar
Legendary Member
Posts: 1309
Joined: Wed Mar 17, 2010 11:41 pm
Thanked: 33 times
Followed by:5 members

by pradeepkaushal9518 » Tue Jul 13, 2010 2:29 am
kvcpk this is really good strategy for solving sc

after reading the question i found that this is combination of verb tense and meaning /conciseness. iwas stuck beetween
A and B
C and D use of being is always incorrect in Gmat
E passive voice

IMO: B

Approach/Steps used for choosing the right answer. :-

For other options, List the errors associated in the following style:
Option: A/B/C/D/E
Subject-Verb Agreement : NA
Parallelism: NA
Pronouns: NA
Modifiers: NA
Verb Tense:yes
Voice and Mood:NA
Comparisons:NA
Idioms:NA
Meaning/Conciseness:yes
Others:NA

i hope i have done well but u should not post oa with question
Top
User avatar
Legendary Member
Posts: 1893
Joined: Sun May 30, 2010 11:48 pm
Thanked: 215 times
Followed by:7 members

by kvcpk » Tue Jul 13, 2010 7:42 am
@Pradeep - Thanks for your comments - As suggested, I will hold the OA from next time.

Quick way to solve this:
What is "Spanning more than 50 years?"
"Muller" or "Muller's career"?
It is "Muller's Career".
AD OUT
"Apprenticeship as" is correct Idiom
"Apprenticeship of" is incorrect idiom. - E OUT
"Apprenticeship of being" is incorrect. - C OUT
pick B.

Errors in other options:
Option A:
"Muller's career" should be the subject of the sentence. Not "Muller".
Option B:
Apart from the correct idiom usage, "Muller's carrer" is used as correct subject for "..Culminated"
Option C:
"Aprrenticeship of being" is incorrect Idiom. "Apprenticeship as" is right.
Option D:
"Muller's career" should be the subject of the sentence. Not "Muller".
Unnecessary usage of Past perfect tense (had begun..)
"Aprrenticeship of being" is incorrect Idiom. "Apprenticeship as" is right.
Option E:
"Muller's Career" is preferred over "Career of Muller".
Unnecessary usage of present perfect (begun)
"Aprrenticeship of " is incorrect Idiom. "Apprenticeship as" is right.

Hope this helps!!
Top
Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts
Posts: 219
Joined: Mon Mar 08, 2010 8:51 pm
Thanked: 62 times
Followed by:5 members
GMAT Score:750

by fitzgerald23 » Tue Jul 13, 2010 7:58 am
IMO: B

Approach/Steps used for choosing the right answer.

First thing I did was glance at the answer choices after reading the sentence to see that the main split was going to be whether the subject of the sentence was Muller or career. Muller culminated is incorrect, so eliminate selections A & D.

I then eliminated E due to the use of "has begun" due to incorrect tense.

Choose B over C due to clarity and correct idiom.
Top
User avatar
Legendary Member
Posts: 1261
Joined: Sun Sep 14, 2008 3:46 am
Thanked: 27 times
GMAT Score:570

by reply2spg » Tue Jul 13, 2010 8:13 am
You did an excellent thing man, appreciate it :)

IMO: B

Approach/Steps used for choosing the right answer.

For other options, List the errors associated in the following style:
Option: A/B/C/D/E
Subject-Verb Agreement : NA
Parallelism: NA
Pronouns: NA
Modifiers: NA
Verb Tense: -- Yes, has begun -- already begun and still in process, E out
Voice and Mood:NA
Comparisons:NA
Idioms:NA
Meaning/Conciseness: - Yes. Who is spanning Muller or Muller's career - Muller's career -- A, D out.
Others:NA
Has being - Yes C, D out

As of now A,C,D, and E out B remains. B it is
kvcpk wrote:Hi All,

Please read this before posting your reply.

Source of this question is OG-12. This question might have been discussed in BTG already. The very reason I am posting again is to approach SC in a structured way. Hence, I request everyone to post their comments in the following manner.

IMO: A/B/C/D/E

Approach/Steps used for choosing the right answer.

For other options, List the errors associated in the following style:
Option: A/B/C/D/E
Subject-Verb Agreement : NA
Parallelism: NA
Pronouns: NA
Modifiers: NA
Verb Tense:NA
Voice and Mood:NA
Comparisons:NA
Idioms:NA
Meaning/Conciseness:NA
Others:NA

This definitely takes a bit more time and effort. But it will help a lot of students to master OG questions/strategies. We need to know the best approach to solve these. It is equally important to know why the wrong answers are wrong. Explanation for each option will detail that out. Plan is to compile all these threads to a single place for future reference. Hope everyone agrees with me!!

Spanning more than 50 years, Friedrich Müller began his career in an unpromising apprenticeship as a Sanskrit scholar and culminated in virtually every honor that European governments and learned societies could bestow.
(A) Müller began his career in an unpromising apprenticeship as
(B) Müller's career began in an unpromising apprenticeship as
(C) Müller's career began with the unpromising apprenticeship of being
(D) Müller had begun his career with the unpromising apprenticeship of being
(E) the career of Müller has begun with an unpromising apprenticeship of

OA B

Expecting active participation and do Let me know your thoughts!!
Sudhanshu
(have lot of things to learn from all of you)
Top
Junior | Next Rank: 30 Posts
Posts: 11
Joined: Fri Jun 06, 2008 10:15 pm
Thanked: 1 times

by [email protected] » Sat Apr 02, 2011 7:05 pm
Is "began in an unpromising apprenticeship " correct idiom?
Top
User avatar
GMAT Instructor
Posts: 641
Joined: Wed Jul 22, 2009 3:07 pm
Location: Madison, WI
Thanked: 162 times
Followed by:45 members
GMAT Score:760

by Jim@Grockit » Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:09 am
[email protected] wrote:Is "began in an unpromising apprenticeship " correct idiom?
Interesting question! After thinking about it for a bit, I think what determines the correct idiom for began is the correct idiom for what comes after. What I mean is, because you would say She is in a promising internship, you could say She began in a promising internship.

In an absolute sense, though, the normal idiom for marking a non-chronological start is began with (as in The word I was thinking of began with P). You would expect began on for a specific date and began at for a time -- again, using the normal idioms for those types of expressions apart from began.
Top
Legendary Member
Posts: 1404
Joined: Tue May 20, 2008 6:55 pm
Thanked: 18 times
Followed by:2 members

by tanviet » Thu Nov 22, 2012 7:46 pm
in B the oa, what is "as a scholar"? the career is as scholar or the apprenticeship is as scholar?
Top
Post new topic Locked
• Page 1 of 1