Comparison basics. Manhattan SC Guide

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Comparison basics. Manhattan SC Guide

by rishijhawar » Fri Apr 20, 2012 8:29 pm
Hi folks, Manhattan's latest SC guide (page 124 of 302) says "Do not use a comparative adjective unless you have a than in the sentence. Always use than with a comparative form" and provides following three illustration:.

Wrong: With winter coming, I will have HIGHER energy bills.
Wrong: I will have HIGHER bills OVER last year.
Right: I will have HIGHER bills THAN last year.

My take: However, I believe the Right choice above is not correct because it compares HIGHER bills with last year rather than comparing bills of this year with those of last year. To me, the below ones are more appropriate. Please correct me if I am wrong. Appreciate your inputs here and also strategy on how to efficiently crack MORE ... THAN... sort of comparison questions.

Right: I will have HIGHER bills this year THAN I had last year.
Right: This year, I will have HIGHER bills THAN I had last year.
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by rishijhawar » Sun Apr 22, 2012 6:43 pm
Hi friends, can someone please take a stab here.
rishijhawar wrote:Hi folks, Manhattan's latest SC guide (page 124 of 302) says "Do not use a comparative adjective unless you have a than in the sentence. Always use than with a comparative form" and provides following three illustration:.

Wrong: With winter coming, I will have HIGHER energy bills.
Wrong: I will have HIGHER bills OVER last year.
Right: I will have HIGHER bills THAN last year.

My take: However, I believe the Right choice above is not correct because it compares HIGHER bills with last year rather than comparing bills of this year with those of last year. To me, the below ones are more appropriate. Please correct me if I am wrong. Appreciate your inputs here and also strategy on how to efficiently crack MORE ... THAN... sort of comparison questions.

Right: I will have HIGHER bills this year THAN I had last year.
Right: This year, I will have HIGHER bills THAN I had last year.

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by lunarpower » Sun May 06, 2012 12:49 pm
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first things first: it's not true that comparison words MUST appear in tandem with "than"; they can certainly appear by themselves, too, if there's enough context to make their meaning clear.

here's an official problem (gmat prep) on which lots of different comparative words appear without "than":
https://www.beatthegmat.com/minivans-car ... 09996.html

i think the point here is just to make you realize that you can't substitute another word for "than".
for instance, you can't write "more X compared to Y", or "more X as Y", or whatever.

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regarding the sentence in the example: yeah, you should probably have an explicit time comparison.
you don't need all of the extra words that are in your examples -- for instance, it's ok to write just "i will have higher bills this year than last" (see also OG12 #93) -- but, yes, you should have that comparison in there.
the authors of that example probably just weren't thinking about that particular issue, because that's not what the sentence is meant to illustrate. (if the sentence were part of a larger context/paragraph, it could be ok without explicitly containing the time comparison. since people don't generally think up sentences completely in isolation, that's probably why the authors didn't include an explicit time comparison.)
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