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neeti2711
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In a continuous series of back"of"the"napkin drawings Carl Richards, who is a financial planner, is explaining the basics of money through simple graphs and diagrams
A. In a continuous series of back"of"the"napkin drawings Carl Richards, who is a financial planner, is explaining the basics of money through simple graphs and diagrams
B. In a continuing series of back"of"the"napkin drawings Carl Richards, a financial planner, has been explaining the basics of money through simple graphs and diagrams
C. In a continuing series involving back"of"the"napkin drawings Carl Richards, a financial planner, has explained the basics of money by means of simple graphs and diagrams
D. In a continuous series of back"of"the"napkin drawings a financial planner, Carl Richards, had been explaining the basics of money through simple graphs and diagrams
E. In a continuing series from back"of"the"napkin drawings Carl Richards, a financial planner, was explaining the basics of money through simple graphs and diagrams
I think 'in a continuing series' and 'has been explaining' are redundant
for eg. it should be --> In a continuing series of Modern Family, Sofia Vergara is playing Gloria and NOT In a continuing series of Modern Family, Sofia Vergara has been playing Gloria
Please tell the difference
A. In a continuous series of back"of"the"napkin drawings Carl Richards, who is a financial planner, is explaining the basics of money through simple graphs and diagrams
B. In a continuing series of back"of"the"napkin drawings Carl Richards, a financial planner, has been explaining the basics of money through simple graphs and diagrams
C. In a continuing series involving back"of"the"napkin drawings Carl Richards, a financial planner, has explained the basics of money by means of simple graphs and diagrams
D. In a continuous series of back"of"the"napkin drawings a financial planner, Carl Richards, had been explaining the basics of money through simple graphs and diagrams
E. In a continuing series from back"of"the"napkin drawings Carl Richards, a financial planner, was explaining the basics of money through simple graphs and diagrams
I think 'in a continuing series' and 'has been explaining' are redundant
for eg. it should be --> In a continuing series of Modern Family, Sofia Vergara is playing Gloria and NOT In a continuing series of Modern Family, Sofia Vergara has been playing Gloria
Please tell the difference
