which includes modify the immediate preceding noun. In option D it's Germany
whereas COMMA+including modifies the preceding clause
So option E is better than option D
Stone Age people
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D has 2 errors
1>Which modifies germany rather than tools.
2>tools(plural) require Include(plural noun) rather than includes(singular verb).
I felt C is close, because the new age of stone age as X, rather than as Y.
Though we can eliminate C for "includes" but still wanted to know how E has parallelism than C?
1>Which modifies germany rather than tools.
2>tools(plural) require Include(plural noun) rather than includes(singular verb).
I felt C is close, because the new age of stone age as X, rather than as Y.
Though we can eliminate C for "includes" but still wanted to know how E has parallelism than C?
Sonu
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