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Nuclear Test

by showbu » Sat Jan 10, 2009 4:17 pm
Engineering teams monitor over a hundred former nuclear test sites for radiation levels, the civilian populace is banned from any area with sufficiently high levels.

a. for radiation levels, the civilian populace

b. to measure radiation levels, yet the civilian populace is

c. for their radiation levels, the civilian populace are

d. for their levels of radiation, and the civilian populace is

e. to determine radiation levels, and the civilian populace are
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Re: Nuclear Test

by logitech » Sat Jan 10, 2009 6:27 pm
showbu wrote:Engineering teams monitor over a hundred former nuclear test sites for radiation levels, the civilian populace is banned from any area with sufficiently high levels.

a. for radiation levels, the civilian populace

RUN ON sentence

b. to measure radiation levels, yet the civilian populace is

I think we don't need a contrast here with YET


c. for their radiation levels, the civilian populace are

IS not ARE


d. for their levels of radiation, and the civilian populace is


e. to determine radiation levels, and the civilian populace are

IS not ARE
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by Bidisha800 » Sat Jan 10, 2009 6:52 pm
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