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by logitech » Thu Jan 15, 2009 4:35 pm
If industrial pollution continues to deplete the ozone layer, the resulting increase in ultraviolet radiation will endanger human health, causing a rise in the incidence of skin cancer and eye disease, and perhaps even threatening global ecological systems.


(A) and perhaps even threatening
(B) and may even threaten
(C) and even a possible threat to
(D) as well as possibly threatening
(E) as well as a possible threat to
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by pandeyvineet24 » Thu Jan 15, 2009 5:02 pm
B for me.
the resulting increase in ultraviolet radiation will endanger human health ..... and may even threaten ....

parallelism.
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by Bidisha800 » Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:31 pm
(B)
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by aroon7 » Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:13 am
B
agree with pandeyvineet24
what is the OA?
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by logitech » Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:33 am
pandeyvineet24 wrote:B for me.
the resulting increase in ultraviolet radiation will endanger human health ..... and may even threaten ....

parallelism.
oa is b
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Re: If industrial pollution

by El Cucu » Fri Jan 30, 2009 7:06 am
logitech wrote:If industrial pollution continues to deplete the ozone layer, the resulting increase in ultraviolet radiation will endanger human health, causing a rise in the incidence of skin cancer and eye disease, and perhaps even threatening global ecological systems.


(A) and perhaps even threatening
(B) and may even threaten
(C) and even a possible threat to
(D) as well as possibly threatening
(E) as well as a possible threat to

Hi Logitech
have the same doubts
Verb prhase with verb phrase (will edanger.. and may...)
By the way, tks for your explanations, which are great contributions!
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by WannaBThere » Fri Jan 30, 2009 9:01 am
IMO B, as it's the only option that gives parallel structure.

If industrial pollution..., .. will endanger.....and may even threaten....
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