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Q72

by vivek.kapoor83 » Wed Aug 27, 2008 6:57 am
72. Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured the preparation of great quantities of ceremonial food, the wearing of many layers of colorful clothing adorned with silver, and the recounting of traditional tribal jokes and stories.
(A) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured
(B) Festivals were held in Aho, a Kiowa matriarch’s home, which featured
(C) Aho, who was a Kiowa matriarch in her home, held festivals featuring
(D) In her home, Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals that featured
(E) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home that featured


imo E while answer of 1000 SC says D.
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by aj5105 » Wed Aug 27, 2008 9:42 am
Request you to keep the excitement alive in the forum.
Please do not post the answer along with the question.

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by stubbornp » Wed Aug 27, 2008 10:37 pm
D is correct...

in E it looks like Home featured the preperation of great quantities of ceremonial food....

but actually there should be festivals...


Hope its clear now...

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by eccentric » Thu Aug 28, 2008 12:34 am
Look at the choices and immediately rule out A, B and E it talks about home featuring that’s incorrect so C and D qualify. C is not worded as well as D hence D is best possible choice

Hope this helps too.

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