Dorothea Lange's most well-known photograph

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Dorothea Lange's most well-known photograph of Florence Owens Thompson, Migrant Mother #6, is more artistic than scientific, more passionate than mechanical; as such, it reveals more about its creator than about its subject.

A. as such, it reveals more about its creator than about its
B. as such, it reveals more about its creator than
C. as such, revealing more about creator than
D. such that it reveals more about its creator than its
E. such that it reveals more about its creator than
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by patanjali.purpose » Sun Nov 25, 2012 2:54 pm
darlingriyarai wrote:Dorothea Lange's most well-known photograph of Florence Owens Thompson, Migrant Mother #6, is more artistic than scientific, more passionate than mechanical; as such, it reveals more about its creator than about its subject.

A. as such, it reveals more about its creator than about its
B. as such, it reveals more about its creator than
C. as such, revealing more about creator than
D. such that it reveals more about its creator than its
E. such that it reveals more about its creator than
C/ D / E - We need to have an independent clause after semicolon. SUCH THAT is not one.

Furthermore, ITS CREATOR must be compared with ITS subject (not just SUBJECT) - drop B/C/E

IMO A

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