What kind of parallelism is being tested here.

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The maternal copy of Nesp55 may encourage the mice to take more risks on behalf of the group, whether that risk involves looking for food, finding a nest, or defending the group.

a.The maternal copy of Nesp55 may encourage the mice to take more risks on behalf of the group, whether that risk involves looking for food, finding a nest, or defending the group.

b.Whether that risk involves looking for food, finding a nest, or acting in the defense of the group, the mice may be encouraged by the maternal copy of Nesp55 to take more risks on behalf of the group.

c.The maternal copy of Nesp55 encourages mice to take more risks on behalf of the group, whether that risk involves looking for food, finding a nest, or the defense of the group.

d.Whether looking for food, finding a nest, or defending the group, the maternal copy of Nesp55 may encourage the mice to take more risks on behalf of the group when doing such activities.

e.The mice may be encouraged by the maternal copy of Nesp55 to take more risks on behalf of the group, whether that risk involves looking for food, finding a nest, or acting in the defense of the group.

OA is A.

In E why is the explanation give as "looking, finding or acting" are not parallel.
Aren't they all gerund phrases? Please explain.

What kind of parallelism is being tested here?
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by pradeepkaushal9518 » Tue Sep 14, 2010 7:42 pm
E- acting in the defense of the group don't u find it too wordy and changing the meaning

compared to A-defending the group
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by navami » Thu Sep 16, 2010 3:25 am
E looks passive too.

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