BREAKING: Target Test Prep releases Brand New 2026 On Demand GMAT prep course

Redeem

whose equity??

Expert replies
by smackmartine » Sat Jun 11, 2011 7:46 pm
There have been few discussions on this but they are not clear to me..so posting again

While depressed property values can hurt some large investors, they are potentially devastating for homeowners, whose equity - in many cases representing a life's savings - can plunge or even disappear.

(A) they are potentially devastating for homeowners, whose
(B) they can potentially devastate homeowners in that their
(C) for homeowners they are potentially devastating, because their
(D) for homeowners, it is potentially devastating in that their
(E) it can potentially devastate homeowners, whose

OA after some discussion. Please explain options briefly at least.
Join the discussion
Source: — Sentence Correction |

by cans » Sat Jun 11, 2011 8:22 pm
IMO A
If my post helped you- let me know by pushing the thanks button ;)

Contact me about long distance tutoring!
[email protected]

Cans!!
Join the discussion

by smackmartine » Sat Jun 11, 2011 8:30 pm
cans wrote:IMO A
If you would explain , that would be great.
Join the discussion

by smackmartine » Sun Jun 12, 2011 1:03 pm
Can someone please explain to me why A is right ? how can we associate equity with a person? "whose equity" just doesn't sound correct. Am I missing something?

Sorry, posted in the wrong section....but pls comment!!!!!!!
Join the discussion

by Frankenstein » Mon Jun 13, 2011 12:15 am
smackmartine wrote:Can someone please explain to me why A is right ? how can we associate equity with a person? "whose equity" just doesn't sound correct. Am I missing something?

Sorry, posted in the wrong section....but pls comment!!!!!!!
Hi,
In every options equity is associated with persons. So, let's not waste time on that.

There have been few discussions on this but they are not clear to me..so posting again

While depressed property values can hurt some large investors, they are potentially devastating for homeowners, whose equity - in many cases representing a life's savings - can plunge or even disappear.

(A) they are potentially devastating for homeowners, whose
(B) they can potentially devastate homeowners in that their (can potentially - redundant, 'in that their' is ambiguous and wordy)
(C) for homeowners they are potentially devastating, because their (ambiguous and wordy)
(D) for homeowners, it is potentially devastating in that their (ambiguous and wordy)
(E) it can potentially devastate homeowners, whose ('it cannot refer to depressed property values --> plural subject)
Cheers!

Things are not what they appear to be... nor are they otherwise
Join the discussion

by smackmartine » Mon Jun 13, 2011 12:32 am
I too rejected all other options based on the same reasoning as you did, but my only confusion was that can equity be associated with person. I just found that dictionary meaning of equity is "The ownership interest of shareholders in a corporation". I think it's clearer to me now.

Thanks anyways.
Join the discussion

by lunarpower » Thu Jun 16, 2011 2:35 am
in this context, "equity" refers to the value held in some investment (whether stock, real estate, or whatever else) by either an individual or a corporation.
Ron has been teaching various standardized tests for 20 years.

--

Pueden hacerle preguntas a Ron en castellano
Potete chiedere domande a Ron in italiano
On peut poser des questions à Ron en français
Voit esittää kysymyksiä Ron:lle myös suomeksi

--

Quand on se sent bien dans un vêtement, tout peut arriver. Un bon vêtement, c'est un passeport pour le bonheur.

Yves Saint-Laurent

--

Learn more about ron
Join the discussion

by nafiul9090 » Thu Jun 16, 2011 10:41 pm
smackmartine wrote:There have been few discussions on this but they are not clear to me..so posting again

While depressed property values can hurt some large investors, they are potentially devastating for homeowners, whose equity - in many cases representing a life's savings - can plunge or even disappear.

(A) they are potentially devastating for homeowners, whose
(B) they can potentially devastate homeowners in that their
(C) for homeowners they are potentially devastating, because their
(D) for homeowners, it is potentially devastating in that their
(E) it can potentially devastate homeowners, whose

OA after some discussion. Please explain options briefly at least.
hello
my approach is that
eliminate B and D because of wrong usage of "in that" idiom which distorts the meaning
eliminate E because "it" didnt refer values correctly.
eliminate c because referent of "thier" is not clear

please correct me if my approach is erroneous

regards nafi
Join the discussion

by lunarpower » Sat Jun 18, 2011 5:33 pm
nafiul9090 wrote:hello
my approach is that
eliminate B and D because of wrong usage of "in that" idiom which distorts the meaning
eliminate E because "it" didnt refer values correctly.
eliminate c because referent of "thier" is not clear

please correct me if my approach is erroneous

regards nafi
looks good. note that (d) also contains the incorrect singular pronoun "it".
Ron has been teaching various standardized tests for 20 years.

--

Pueden hacerle preguntas a Ron en castellano
Potete chiedere domande a Ron in italiano
On peut poser des questions à Ron en français
Voit esittää kysymyksiä Ron:lle myös suomeksi

--

Quand on se sent bien dans un vêtement, tout peut arriver. Un bon vêtement, c'est un passeport pour le bonheur.

Yves Saint-Laurent

--

Learn more about ron
Join the discussion

• Page 1 of 1