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by kashefian » Sun Nov 21, 2010 11:22 pm
Maribel proved herself deserving of the MVP award in girls'
basketball, scoring a record number of goals, becoming the first female
player at the school to slam dunk in a championship game, and inspiring
her teammates immeasurably.


Is the paragraph above correct? if not please mention whatever is incorrect and explain why do you think it is incorrect.
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by shovan85 » Mon Nov 22, 2010 12:44 am
kashefian wrote:Maribel proved herself deserving of the MVP award in girls'
basketball, scoring a record number of goals, becoming the first female
player at the school to slam dunk in a championship game, and inspiring
her teammates immeasurably.
IMO its correct.

She proved something by doing 3 things (scoring, becoming, inspiring). These three actions are in Parallel.
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