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by jain2016 » Mon Nov 02, 2015 7:20 am

While many teachers work at schools in addition to conducting private tuitions.



Hi Experts ,

I just need a reason that, what is wrong is this sentence?

Please share your thoughts.

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by Jim@StratusPrep » Mon Nov 02, 2015 3:09 pm
There are (at least) a couple of things wrong:

1) it is not a complete sentence
2) conducting private tuitions is not the proper use; it should be private tutoring, instruction, etc...
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by jain2016 » Thu Nov 05, 2015 10:39 pm
1) it is not a complete sentence
Hi Jim ,

Thanks for your reply, but why this sentence is not a complete? What else do we need to make that sentence complete.

Please advise.

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