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by ronniecoleman » Mon Nov 17, 2008 4:49 am
ok.... agree

for options A , this is a clear case of sentence fragmentation.

ideally if you refer Manhattan blogs --> you will find this rule used :

ed participle modifies the preceding noun, not the subject of the clause
ing participle modifies the subject of the preceding clause.

( both if occur at the end of the sentence )
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by ronniecoleman » Mon Nov 17, 2008 4:54 am
I am not saying that A is correct,

but the reasoning given for the Incorrect option A is Wrong.
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by Carloblacksun » Mon Nov 17, 2008 4:54 am
I personally understand why B is correct, but I would say that it can be considered as "Akward", don't you think?