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pls give OE

by armaan700+ » Wed Jul 29, 2009 7:53 pm
Charlotte Parkins Gilman, a late nineteenth-century feminist, called for urban apartment houses including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities.
(A) including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities
(B) that included child-care facilities, and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities
(C) with child-care facilities included and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities
(D) that included child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities
(E) to include child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities included

NEED OE
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Re: pls give OE

by madhur_ahuja » Wed Jul 29, 2009 8:57 pm
Its a ||ism question.

IMO D

Called for ........... and for ......... are parallel.
Charlotte Parkins Gilman, a late nineteenth-century feminist, called for urban apartment houses including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities.

(A) including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities

(B) that included child-care facilities, and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities ... to include is awkward .. it shows purpose which is not required

(C) with child-care facilities included and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities ... again not parallel and to include is awkward

(D) that included child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities

(E) to include child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities included .. to include .. not parallel

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by Shawshank » Thu Jul 30, 2009 2:58 am
IMO - D

Parallelism

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