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by chasebuzz » Fri Jul 15, 2011 7:45 am
The development of a new jumbo rocket that is expected to carry the United States into its next phase of space exploration will be able to deliver a heavier load of instruments into orbit than the space shuttle and at a lower cost.

(A) The development of a new jumbo rocket that is expected to carry the United States into its next phase of space exploration will be able to deliver a heavier load of instruments into orbit than the space shuttle and at a lower cost.
(B) The development of a new jumbo rocket is expected to carry the United States into its next phase of space exploration and be able to deliver a heavier load of instruments into orbit at a lower cost than the space shuttle.
(C) The new development of a jumbo rocket, which is expected to carry the United States into its next phase of space exploration, will be able to deliver a heavier load of instruments into orbit at a lower cost than the space shuttle.
(D) A newly developed jumbo rocket, which is expected to carry the United States into its next phase of space exploration, will be able to deliver a heavier load of instruments into orbit than the space shuttle can, and at a lower cost.
(E) A newly developed jumbo rocket, which is expected to carry the United States into its next phase of space exploration, will be able to deliver a heavier load of instruments into orbit than the space shuttle and to cost less.

OA D

I know that this question has been covered before, but I don't understand how the comma before the "and" in D is correct. Shouldn't the clause following the comma + "and" be independent? I understand why all the other answers are incorrect.

The source of this question is the OG 11th edition.
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by VivianKerr » Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:19 am
If we rewrite the sentence in simpler terms, it would look like this:

The new rocket will be able to deliver a heavier load, and at a lower cost.

The implied meaning is:

The new rocker will be able to deliver a heavier load, and be able to deliver it at a lower cost.
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by jaguar123 » Sat Jul 16, 2011 4:43 am
Isnt the meaning distorted in D.

It is the development which will carry US to next level, rather than the rocket itself? as per the original statement.
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