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Parallelism issue, please help~

ROWE aims to judge performance on output instead of hours

This is a sentence i saw on BusinessWeek, are "on output" and "hours" considered parallel?

by sinmk2

Sun Mar 10, 2013 12:23 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Parallelism issue, please help~
Replies: 1
Views: 843

OG 12th, #104, about Parallelism

With answer choice E, the sentence goes like: El Nino, the periodic abnormal warming of the sea surface off Peru, is a phenomenon where ocean and atmosphere changes are combining and allow the warm water accumulating in the western Pacific to flow back to the east. Although I understand why this opt...

by sinmk2

Sat Mar 09, 2013 10:08 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: OG 12th, #104, about Parallelism
Replies: 2
Views: 1252

In virtually all types of tissue in every animal species, dioxin induces the production of enzymes that ARE the organism's attempt to metabolize, or render harmless, the chemical irritant What ARE the organism's attempt? "the production" or "enzymes"? If I am correct, "prod...

by sinmk2

Fri Jan 25, 2013 7:54 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: OG 12th, #24, please help~
Replies: 3
Views: 1197

OG 12th, #24, please help~

In virtually all types of tissue in every animal species, dioxin induces the production of enzymes that ARE the organism's attempt to metabolize, or render harmless, the chemical irritant What ARE the organism's attempt? "the production" or "enzymes"? If I am correct, "produ...

by sinmk2

Thu Jan 24, 2013 9:17 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: OG 12th, #24, please help~
Replies: 3
Views: 1197

ELLIPSIS is the omission of words whose presence is understood. The OA implies the following: THE ECONOMY MIGHT NOT BE AS WEAK as some analysts previously thought [THAT THE ECONOMY WOULD BE WEAK] . The words in bracket are omitted, but their presence is understood. A surge in new home sales and a d...

by sinmk2

Wed Jan 23, 2013 3:59 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: OG 12th, #13, please help~
Replies: 7
Views: 2259

OG 12th, #13, please help~

A surge in new home sales and a drop in weekly unemployment claims suggest that the economy might not be as weak as some analysts previously thought . (A) claims suggest that the economy might not be as weak as some analysts previously thought (B) claims suggests that the economy might not be so wea...

by sinmk2

Mon Jan 21, 2013 7:53 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: OG 12th, #13, please help~
Replies: 7
Views: 2259