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gmatrant
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Uninterested in the lecture, the orator put most of the audience to sleep.
This sentence was corrected to the following in Manhattan SC book.
The orator put most of the audience, which was uninterested in the lecture, to sleep.
The above sentence looks very awkward.. and i modified it as below
The orator put most of the audience, uninterested in the lecture, to sleep.
which is used to modify things, who is used to modify people.
This is my understanding..
Please comment.
This sentence was corrected to the following in Manhattan SC book.
The orator put most of the audience, which was uninterested in the lecture, to sleep.
The above sentence looks very awkward.. and i modified it as below
The orator put most of the audience, uninterested in the lecture, to sleep.
which is used to modify things, who is used to modify people.
This is my understanding..
Please comment.
