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by mehrasa » Wed Sep 21, 2011 6:49 am
Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people now using their mobile phones to make calls across a wide region at night and on weekends, when numerous wireless companies provide unlimited airtime for a relatively small monthly fee.
(A) Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people
(B) As the cost of wireless service plummeted in the last year and as mobile phones became increasingly common, many people
(C) In the last year, with the cost of wireless service plummeting, and mobile phones have become increasingly common, there are many people
(D) With the cost of wireless service plummeting in the last year and mobile phones becoming increasingly common, many people are
(E) While the cost of wireless service has plummeted in the last year and mobile phones are increasingly common, many people are
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by gmatclubmember » Wed Sep 21, 2011 6:55 am
is D the OA?
B and E used 'plummeted' incorrectly.
C. -> mobile phones HAVE become ---- is incorrect
A. -> mobile phones are increasingly common ----- is missing the word becoming before increasingly common.


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by sl750 » Wed Sep 21, 2011 6:58 am
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by GmatKiss » Wed Sep 21, 2011 7:02 am
mehrasa wrote:Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people now using their mobile phones to make calls across a wide region at night and on weekends, when numerous wireless companies provide unlimited airtime for a relatively small monthly fee.
(A) Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people
(B) As the cost of wireless service plummeted in the last year and as mobile phones became increasingly common, many people
(C) In the last year, with the cost of wireless service plummeting, and mobile phones have become increasingly common, there are many people
(D) With the cost of wireless service plummeting in the last year and mobile phones becoming increasingly common, many people are
(E) While the cost of wireless service has plummeted in the last year and mobile phones are increasingly common, many people are
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by Pooja Dixit » Wed Sep 21, 2011 8:48 am
IMO D
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by GmatKiss » Wed Sep 21, 2011 9:49 am
IMO:D
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by gmatblood » Wed Sep 21, 2011 11:17 am
IMO D
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by need720+ » Wed Sep 21, 2011 7:06 pm
+1 fr D
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by gunjan1208 » Wed Sep 21, 2011 8:41 pm
D again
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by mehrasa » Wed Sep 21, 2011 8:49 pm
OA: D
thnx guys :)
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