use verb or use adjective.pls,help

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use verb or use adjective.pls,help

by tanviet » Sun Aug 24, 2008 7:23 pm
The spraying of pesticides can be carefully planned, but accidents, /weather conditions that could not be foreseen, and pilot errors often cause much larger deposits of spray than they had anticipated.

a,
b, weather conditions that cannot be foreseen, and pilot errors often cause much larger deposits of spray than

c, unforesseeable weather conditions, and pilot errors are the cause of much larger deposits of spray than they had

d, weather conditions that are not foresseeable, and pilot errors, often cause much larger deposites of spray than

e, unforeseeable weather conditions, and pilot errors often cause much larger deposits of spray than they had


b, and d is good candidates. Which is correc?
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by wonder » Sun Aug 24, 2008 7:41 pm
according to me it should be B

1. 'foreseeable' is an adjective which should not be used as the object of a sentence (eg 'this work cannot be done' is preferable over 'this work is not doable')

2. secondly, i think, 'weather conditions that cannot be foreseen' goes better with 'spraying of pesticides can be carefully planned' (not quite sure if this is a good enough reaons though)

what is the oa??? anyone can see some major error in D?

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by pepeprepa » Mon Aug 25, 2008 1:48 am
The last coma in D is not required so B

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