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by stubbornp » Wed Aug 20, 2008 8:15 pm
imo c...clear & concise

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by medea66 » Thu Aug 21, 2008 5:38 pm
Isn't choice E just as clear and concise or is there a meaning change here?

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by paku_4u » Fri Aug 22, 2008 1:10 am
a comma before 'and' makes C go for a toss! :)

so the answer is A

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by kiranlegend » Fri Aug 22, 2008 5:07 am
what does -....- means in the above question? is it a kind of punctuation like comma or colon? can someone explain this pls?

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by medea66 » Sat Aug 23, 2008 5:02 pm
paku- C I understand, but what is wrong w/ E?

kiranlegend- I think the dash in the underlined piece serves as a pause...either comma/semicolon. I really don't understand why it is necessary.

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by newera » Sun Aug 24, 2008 4:21 am
If you pick E, the sentence sounds like a run-on...it doesn't end well and sounds awkward. Try reading it out loud and you'll find yourself wanting to end the sentence, but it doesn't....it ends with "..."

I don't know how else to better explain it.

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by Vignesh.4384 » Sun Aug 24, 2008 5:29 am
I think this a good question

Archeologit ... excavated a 5000 year old wooden skull that is the earliest .... and that thus represents ....


Archeologit ... excavated a 5000 year old wooden skull ---> main clause

that - > introduces a sub ordinate clause

and -> introduces another clause

that -> should refer back to wooden skull of the mail clause

If u notice the second that is not contained inside the first that

Option A is correct because there is a proper reference to wooden skull

Option C does not properly refer to the wooden skull of the main clause . It would probably refer to the excavated a 5000 year old wooden skull of the mail clause . This is not desired.
The wooden skull represents a major advance and not the excavation of the wooden skull.


Option E cannot be the aanswer because there is not proper reference to the wooden skull of the main clause.
If u chose option E u would be saying that "a boat counstructed out of wooden planks" as the major advancement. That is not the intention

I hope ppl can understand this .

Please correct me if i am wrong

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by kiranlegend » Sun Aug 24, 2008 11:53 am
Vignesh.4384 wrote:I think this a good question

Archeologit ... excavated a 5000 year old wooden skull that is the earliest .... and that thus represents ....


Archeologit ... excavated a 5000 year old wooden skull ---> main clause

that - > introduces a sub ordinate clause

and -> introduces another clause

that -> should refer back to wooden skull of the mail clause

If u notice the second that is not contained inside the first that

Option A is correct because there is a proper reference to wooden skull

Option C does not properly refer to the wooden skull of the main clause . It would probably refer to the excavated a 5000 year old wooden skull of the mail clause . This is not desired.
The wooden skull represents a major advance and not the excavation of the wooden skull.


Option E cannot be the aanswer because there is not proper reference to the wooden skull of the main clause.
If u chose option E u would be saying that "a boat counstructed out of wooden planks" as the major advancement. That is not the intention

I hope ppl can understand this .

Please correct me if i am wrong

In short, I guess, we can say A has parallel structure.. right?:)

one more reason, possibly, E might be wrong could be due to lack of finish of that dash :lol:

correct me if am wrong?

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by pepeprepa » Mon Aug 25, 2008 1:54 am
Whatever you need to have the other "-" to get the sentence right?
Only one "-" is not possible I think so --> A or B

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