the cupid's arrows

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the cupid's arrows

by kaulnikhil » Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:16 pm
Though released by Edward in only his twenties, his masterpiece to date, 'the cupid's arrows' does not seem to appear as an amateur art would

A. does not seem to appear as an amateur art would
B. seems not to appear as an amateur art
C. does not appear like an amateur art
D. does not appear like an amateur art does
E. appears unlike an amateur art
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by max37274 » Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:38 pm
seem to appear AWKWARD MAY BE REDUNDANT AXBX
EX Changes the meaning
DX like is used with a clause "amateu art does"
C is the answer. OA pls

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by kaulnikhil » Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:39 pm
Can you please explain how E changes the meaning
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OA C

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by wonderland130 » Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:43 pm
seem to appear and appear are same so a and are wordy a and b are gone. E is saying that the cupid's arrow actually appears likes comes out of somewhere and that the amateur art doesn't appear

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by kaulnikhil » Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:51 pm
wonderland130 wrote:seem to appear and appear are same so a and are wordy a and b are gone. E is saying that the cupid's arrow actually appears likes comes out of somewhere and that the amateur art doesn't appear
Cant get you .. can you please elaborate how E changes the meaning of question /??

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by wonderland130 » Thu Mar 04, 2010 1:08 pm
The intent of the author is to say that the art is not typical of amateur art. The way E is written it is saying that it the cupid's arrow appears and that the amateur art does not appear. Meaning of the word appears is not the author's intent in E

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by max37274 » Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:19 pm
Nikhil, E is a strong word and sounds too sure because of the word "unlike". E is sure that x is unlike y. Now in the argument the writer is not 100% sure as he/she uses the word "would", "seems" etc

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by girish3131 » Thu Mar 04, 2010 11:44 pm
aaa
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by yeahdisk » Fri Mar 05, 2010 5:24 am
where is this question from

"an amateur art" doesn't make much sense in english?

('a piece of amateur art' or 'an amateur artwork')

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