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by missionmba » Sun Aug 10, 2008 6:53 am
Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured the preparation of great quantities of ceremonial food, the wearing of many layers of colorful clothing adorned with silver, and the recounting of traditional tribal jokes and stories.

(A) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured
(B) Festivals were held in Aho, a Kiowa matriarch’s home, which featured
(C) Aho, who was a Kiowa matriarch in her home, held festivals featuring
(D) In her home, Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals that featured
(E) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home that featured
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by raunekk » Sun Aug 10, 2008 7:26 am
imo:E
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by aj5105 » Sun Aug 10, 2008 9:12 am
Will go with A.

E : converys the meaning that the home featured... & not the festivals.
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by raunekk » Sun Aug 10, 2008 9:51 am
u r right aj5105!!

u r correct...

thanks ..it shud b A!!

That refers to "home"
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by sibbineni » Sun Aug 10, 2008 9:55 am
IMO D
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by dileepsinha » Sun Aug 10, 2008 9:59 am
A is completely wrong, I believe, you can not join two sentences with a coma, those should be separated eitherer by a comma or a semi colon.
what about D...?
I think D looks right, with all rules of grammer right, albeit with a lousy sentence correction.
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