Most difficult SC correction

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Most difficult SC correction

by vid6cob » Thu Jun 20, 2013 2:46 am
Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote dwellings in the Transvaal to photograph the art of Ndebele women, whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house.
A. whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house
B. whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and their style is varying among women and houses
C. whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and they are in styles that vary from woman to woman and house to house
D. with murals brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their style varies among women and houses
E. with murals that are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their styles vary among women and houses

Can any one explain the solution ?

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Sagar.
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by bewger » Thu Jun 20, 2013 1:29 pm
I think the use of "with" is incorrect. D and E are out.

Whose murals refers to the women's murals. So "their geometrical ..." must refer to the murals and not to the women.
Also, I think that "vary among women and houses" is incorrect in this case. B is out.

There is a parallelism issue in C. "Whose murals ...," "their geometrical ..,," and "they are ..." seem to be referring back to the women. So C is out.

My answer is A.

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by theunheardmelody » Fri Jun 21, 2013 7:01 am
POE and got to A ..

Also, the sentence has to start with "Whose" since we are referring to the women. And second condition is where we need to maintain parallelism between woman and house.

Good Question.

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