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by hitmewithgmat » Tue Oct 20, 2009 4:32 am
In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is lined with lead around the perimeter, thereby improving stability in flight and resulting in longer throws.

A.In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is
B.According to a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition was concentrated in a metal center, but now it is
C.Once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, the discus used in track competition is now
D.This discus used in track competition, once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, but now
E.The discus used in track competition was once designed having its weight concentrated in a metal center and now
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by Gaurav Yadav » Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:05 am
I think C should be the answer.

It brings clearly the contrast required between "once" and "now" (present) situations, without any use of redundant words like 'but' & 'and'.
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by hitmewithgmat » Tue Oct 20, 2009 7:32 am
you are correct. OA is C.
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Re: Weight of discus

by JeffB » Tue Oct 20, 2009 7:42 am
hitmewithgmat wrote:In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is lined with lead around the perimeter, thereby improving stability in flight and resulting in longer throws.

A.In a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition is concentrated in a metal center, but now it is
B.According to a previous design, the weight of the discus used in track competition was concentrated in a metal center, but now it is
C.Once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, the discus used in track competition is now
D.This discus used in track competition, once designed with its weight concentrated in a metal center, but now
E.The discus used in track competition was once designed having its weight concentrated in a metal center and now
I was thinking C because of misplaced modifiers.

It's saying the weight is lined with lead around the perimeter.

It needs to say the discus is lined, not the weight of the discuss.
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by kitychel77 » Mon Mar 11, 2013 5:55 pm
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by kitychel77 » Mon Mar 11, 2013 6:02 pm
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by Zarrolou » Mon Mar 11, 2013 11:22 pm
maybe C
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