SC- Pronoun error

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SC- Pronoun error

by nittinj » Mon Sep 29, 2008 8:12 pm
The federalists papers is a compliation of articles written by Alexander H. and James M., as well as few by John Jay, since each of them were advocates of consitution.

B. since they were each
C. since all of them were
D. each of which was
E. because all of the men were

according to me D&E are definitely wrong... I am confused regarding ABC

cansome explain with lill more insight about Pronoun errors

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by Mani_mba » Mon Sep 29, 2008 8:30 pm
To me E gets rid of the pronoun problems that other options face.

Use of they/them in A/B/C is ambiguous as they can refer to either the men or papers.

Let me know if i am missing something.

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by nittinj » Mon Sep 29, 2008 8:43 pm
i think ur right...i dont have OA

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by stop@800 » Tue Sep 30, 2008 3:00 am
yes I also think answer should be E.

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by gmat009 » Tue Sep 30, 2008 6:43 am
IMO B.
B looks lot better than rest of options

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by Darshan.D » Tue Sep 30, 2008 7:59 am
I think B is correct.. E sounds wordy

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by anju » Tue Sep 30, 2008 8:19 am
imo: B

they is referring to "Alexander H. and James M., as well as few by John Jay"

The correct choices are
they were each OR
each of them was - since this option is not provided

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by nittinj » Tue Sep 30, 2008 7:00 pm
thnks everybody....now mee to chaning the stand :D

E is definitely verbose

original sentence - articles written by......advocates

is wrong since articles is plural so articles written...advocate should be correct

so in order to match advocates

The federalists papers is a compliation of articles written by Alexander H. and James M., as well as few by John Jay, since they were EACH
advocates of consitution.

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