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by neha.patni » Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:34 pm
823. The Rorschzch test is gaining new respect as a diagnostic tool because it takes only one hour to expose behavior and thought processes that may be unlikely to emerge in other procedures or weeks of ordinary interviewing.

(A) that may be unlikely to emerge in other procedures or weeks of ordinary interviewing
(B) whose emergence is unlikely in other procedures or weeks of ordinary interviews
(C) that might not emerge in other procedures or in weeks of ordinary interviews
(D) that may not emerge under other procedures or weeks of ordinary interviews
(E) unlikely not to emerge during weeks of ordinary interviewing or in other procedures

OA - C
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by albatross86 » Wed Jun 30, 2010 12:06 am
"that may be unlikely to emerge in A or in B" You need parallelism here.

A. Not parallel.

B. "whose" is incorrect. Again, parallelism is lost because of the lack of "in" before weeks. Also wordy.

C. Parallel, and might not is more concise than "may be unlikely"

D. Not parallel.

E. Wordy. Emerge during A or in B is not parallel.

Pick C.
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by 786 » Wed Jun 30, 2010 8:33 am
Also ,
may be unlikely in A is redundant
Unlikely in in B is unidiomatic .
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