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by gmat_perfect » Thu Jul 08, 2010 6:54 am
Due to automobile-related jobs in the 1920's employing one of every eight workers, the automobile industry dominated the American economy.

(A) Due to automobile-related jobs in the 1920's employing one of every eight workers, the automobile industry dominated the American economy.

(B) One out of every eight workers were employed in automobile-related jobs in the 1920's, with the American economy being dominated by the automobile industry.

(C) The automobile industry dominated the American economy in the 1920's, with one of every eight workers having been employed in automobile-related jobs.

(D) In the 1920's, the automobile industry had dominated the American economy, when one out of every eight workers was employed in an automobile-related job.

(E) In the 1920's, the automobile industry dominated the American economy, with one out of every eight workers employed in an automobile-related job.

Which one is correct and why?
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by albatross86 » Thu Jul 08, 2010 7:05 am
A. Due to jobs employing... This is absurd as jobs would not be "employing"

B. This reverses the intended sequence of events, in which the employment led to the domination. "being dominated" is wordy.

C. Wordy usage of "having been"

D. "Had dominated" - past perfect is unnecessary and wordy here. The clause starting with "when" is awkwardly placed after "economy".

E. gmat_perfect! ;) "with" correctly indicates the fact that this high employment led to the domination. No tense errors.

Pick E.
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by gmat_perfect » Thu Jul 08, 2010 9:52 am
albatross86 wrote:A. Due to jobs employing... This is absurd as jobs would not be "employing"

B. This reverses the intended sequence of events, in which the employment led to the domination. "being dominated" is wordy.

C. Wordy usage of "having been"

D. "Had dominated" - past perfect is unnecessary and wordy here. The clause starting with "when" is awkwardly placed after "economy".

E. gmat_perfect! ;) "with" correctly indicates the fact that this high employment led to the domination. No tense errors.

Pick E.
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