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by pradeepkaushal9518 » Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:37 pm
Recent research has indicated that sustainable weight loss is generally a result not of self-deprivation or adopting an extreme diet, but a healthy lifestyle that integrates a balanced diet, regular exercise, and a long-term approach.



self-deprivation or adopting an extreme diet, but

self-deprivation or the adoption of an extreme diet, but of

self-deprivation or the adoption of an extreme diet, but

depriving oneself or adopting an extreme diet, but

depriving oneself or adopting an extreme diet, but that of
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by The Jock » Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:56 pm
IMO B for maintaining correct parallel structure.
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by kvcpk » Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:33 am
IMO B
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by ashish2104 » Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:56 am
IMO B.

NOT OF X, BUT OF Y
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by ashish2104 » Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:57 am
IMO B.

NOT OF X, BUT OF Y
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by pradeepkaushal9518 » Wed Jul 14, 2010 2:40 am
thanks ashish that i want to understand B and C both looks parallel but why C is not correct

here of x and of y is parallel
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by indiantiger » Wed Jul 14, 2010 3:14 am
pradeepkaushal9518 wrote:thanks ashish that i want to understand B and C both looks parallel but why C is not correct

here of x and of y is parallel
Try to read it like this :

Recent research has indicated that sustainable weight loss is generally a result not of self-deprivation or the adoption of an extreme diet

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Recent research has indicated that sustainable weight loss is generally a result of a healthy lifestyle that integrates a balanced diet, regular exercise, and a long-term approach.


The "of" in the second sentence makes it more clear that weight loss is result of something.
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