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by chitrasekar2k5 » Sat Apr 13, 2013 2:44 am
Although it claims to delve into political issues, television can be superficial such as when each of the three major networks broadcast exactly the same statement from a political candidate.
(A) superficial such as when each of the three major networks
(B) superficial, as can sometimes occur if all of the three major networks (C) superficial if the three major networks all
(D) superficial whenever each of the three major networks
(E) superficial, as when the three major networks each

Can some one give me the correct answer and explain me why?
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by GMATGuruNY » Sat Apr 13, 2013 3:49 am
chitrasekar2k5 wrote:Although it claims to delve into political issues, television can be superficial such as when each of the three major networks broadcast exactly the same statement from a political candidate.

(A) superficial such as when each of the three major networks
(B) superficial, as can sometimes occur if all of the three major networks
(C) superficial if the three major networks all
(D) superficial whenever each of the three major networks
(E) superficial, as when the three major networks each
In A and D, each (singular) does not agree with broadcast (plural).
Eliminate A and D.

In B, can be and can sometimes are redundant.
Eliminate B.

C changes the intended meaning by replacing when with if.
The intention here is to express a GENERAL TRUTH about television: television can be superficial.
But C states that television can be superficial ONLY IF A PARTICULAR CONDITION IS SATISFIED: if the three networks all broadcast the same statement.
Since C changes the intended meaning, eliminate C.

The correct answer is E.
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by ice_rush » Sat Apr 13, 2013 10:27 am
Hi Mitch,

When you say choice C changes the intended meaning, are you taking the meaning in choice A as the intended meaning?


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by Mission2012 » Sat Apr 13, 2013 2:14 pm
GMATGuruNY wrote:
chitrasekar2k5 wrote:Although it claims to delve into political issues, television can be superficial such as when each of the three major networks broadcast exactly the same statement from a political candidate.

(A) superficial such as when each of the three major networks
(B) superficial, as can sometimes occur if all of the three major networks
(C) superficial if the three major networks all
(D) superficial whenever each of the three major networks
(E) superficial, as when the three major networks each
In A and D, each (singular) does not agree with broadcast (plural).
Eliminate A and D.

In B, can be and can sometimes are redundant.
Eliminate B.

C changes the intended meaning by replacing when with if.
The intention here is to express a GENERAL TRUTH about television: television can be superficial.
But C states that television can be superficial ONLY IF A PARTICULAR CONDITION IS SATISFIED: if the three networks all broadcast the same statement.
Since C changes the intended meaning, eliminate C.

The correct answer is E.
Hi Mitch,

Although it claims to delve into political issues, television can be superficial, as when the three major networks each broadcast exactly the same statement from a political candidate.

in option E (construction above)- "as when.." is used to give examples in the same way as "such as" or "as when..." acting as modifier here?

Could you please explain.

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by GMATGuruNY » Sat Apr 13, 2013 3:25 pm
ice_rush wrote:Hi Mitch,

When you say choice C changes the intended meaning, are you taking the meaning in choice A as the intended meaning?

thanks!
Unless the meaning of the original sentence is nonsensical, we should look for an answer choice that preserves the intended meaning and eliminate answer choices that change the intended meaning.
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by GMATGuruNY » Sat Apr 13, 2013 3:38 pm
Mission2012 wrote:
GMATGuruNY wrote:
chitrasekar2k5 wrote:Although it claims to delve into political issues, television can be superficial such as when each of the three major networks broadcast exactly the same statement from a political candidate.

(A) superficial such as when each of the three major networks
(B) superficial, as can sometimes occur if all of the three major networks
(C) superficial if the three major networks all
(D) superficial whenever each of the three major networks
(E) superficial, as when the three major networks each
In A and D, each (singular) does not agree with broadcast (plural).
Eliminate A and D.

In B, can be and can sometimes are redundant.
Eliminate B.

C changes the intended meaning by replacing when with if.
The intention here is to express a GENERAL TRUTH about television: television can be superficial.
But C states that television can be superficial ONLY IF A PARTICULAR CONDITION IS SATISFIED: if the three networks all broadcast the same statement.
Since C changes the intended meaning, eliminate C.

The correct answer is E.
Hi Mitch,

Although it claims to delve into political issues, television can be superficial, as when the three major networks each broadcast exactly the same statement from a political candidate.

in option E (construction above)- "as when.." is used to give examples in the same way as "such as" or "as when..." acting as modifier here?

Could you please explain.

Thanks
COMMA + as at the end of a sentence typically serves as an ADVERB modifying the preceding clause -- in particular, the preceding VERB.
In the OA, the as-modifier serves to modify can be, explaining HOW television CAN BE superficial:
Television CAN BE superficial, AS [it is superficial] when the three networks each broadcast the same statement.
The words in brackets are omitted, but their presence is understood.
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by anjalimanas » Tue Apr 30, 2013 6:18 pm
Dear Mitch,

Each is singular, however in Choice E can see that each is used as plural

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by EducationAisle » Tue Apr 30, 2013 8:57 pm
This is one of those quirks Anjali. Following are both correct:

Each of them is confident of doing well on GMAT.

They each are confident of doing well on GMAT.
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