I don't mean to offend you but I don't understand what you are trying to say when OA is C you will go for E.
This is a Gmat Paper test Q correct? There must be a reason why C is correct. If it were some other source we can think of a bad question.
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@ khurram
(E) astronomers have developed a scale that rates the likelihood of a particular asteroid or comet that may.... the use of both 'likelihood' and 'may' is redundant and makes this option wrong.
I agree that C might look awkward at the first instance but read carefully and you may start loving it
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(E) astronomers have developed a scale that rates the likelihood of a particular asteroid or comet that may.... the use of both 'likelihood' and 'may' is redundant and makes this option wrong.
I agree that C might look awkward at the first instance but read carefully and you may start loving it
cheers!!
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No, E is not the correct answer. Inserting answer E into the sentence gives:khurram wrote:
Although OA is C, but I will go for E. Does anyone agree
"Responding to the public’s fascination with-and sometimes undue alarm over-possible threats from asteroids, astronomers have developed a scale that rates the likelihood of a particular asteroid or comet that may.collide with Earth."
The astronmers' scale in this sentence rates the likelihood of a collision; using answer choice E, it rates the likelihood of an 'asteroid or comet', which doesn't make sense. Answer C makes clear what the scale measures.
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