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SC - Singular Vs Plural

by karthikpandian19 » Mon May 28, 2012 11:38 pm
The idea behind the Personal Long Letter campaign is that a single impassioned constituent may sway a lawmaker's opinion, whereas a half-dozen banded together only causes him alarm.

a half-dozen banded together only causes him alarm
only alarm is caused by a half-dozen banded together
only alarm has been caused by a half-dozen banded together
a half-dozen banded together only cause him alarm
a half-dozen have caused him only alarm when banded together
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by sam2304 » Tue May 29, 2012 8:36 am
IMO D

A - half dozen ... causes ... - SV error
B - sway and caused are not parallel - the second part is passive while the first is active
C - same as above more over there is no need to use present perfect continuous tense
E - totally awkward with half dozen and banded together separated and have caused - present perfect tense is not necessary.
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by Ashujain » Tue May 29, 2012 10:07 am
sam2304 wrote:IMO D

A - half dozen ... causes ... - SV error
B - sway and caused are not parallel - the second part is passive while the first is active
C - same as above more over there is no need to use present perfect continuous tense
E - totally awkward with half dozen and banded together separated and have caused - present perfect tense is not necessary.
I think 'half-dozen banded together' is a singular noun so the verb should be 'causes' and not 'cause'.

IMO: A

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by sam2304 » Tue May 29, 2012 11:22 am
Ashujain wrote:
I think 'half-dozen banded together' is a singular noun so the verb should be 'causes' and not 'cause'.

IMO: A
Half dozen (constituents) banded together is the implied meaning if you look at the whole sentence, because the first clause is speaking about single impassioned constituent. And half dozen constituents is plural.
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by karthikpandian19 » Tue May 29, 2012 1:33 pm
Sam,

The OA points to A, with the OE stating that "half dozen" to be considered as Singular.

Even i am looking out for some experts to clarify the ambiguity here.


Can any GMAT experts explain the singular ambiguity here????
sam2304 wrote:IMO D

A - half dozen ... causes ... - SV error
B - sway and caused are not parallel - the second part is passive while the first is active
C - same as above more over there is no need to use present perfect continuous tense
E - totally awkward with half dozen and banded together separated and have caused - present perfect tense is not necessary.
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by jimmyjimmy » Wed May 30, 2012 8:35 am
rule - a word that indicates sm sort of group takes singular form

5 dozen or half dozen is rotten

audience is moving (fine)
half of the audience is moving (fine)
full audience is moving (fine)
2 guys from the audience are moving (fine).

correct me if worng....

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by karthikpandian19 » Wed May 30, 2012 5:16 pm
When using "a dozen" or "one dozen", it is followed by "is". The "dozen" is the subject.

Q: How much are the roses?
A: A dozen is $50.

Q: How much do you charge?
A: A dozen roses is $50.

Similarly, "dozens" is plural, and is never preceded by a number. It means indefinite small numbers, ie. Dozens of angry residents complain that their expectations have not been met. Other expressions like "half a dozen" or "a half dozen" exist too and follow the same rule as "dozen".

Other examples of one singular unit of many sub-units:

A school of fishes swims past.
An army of soldiers marches across the field.
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by sam2304 » Wed May 30, 2012 10:37 pm
I found an explanation by an expert in another forum

https://gmatclub.com/forum/the-idea-behi ... 98990.html
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by jimmyjimmy » Thu May 31, 2012 5:56 am
sam2304 wrote:I found an explanation by an expert in another forum

https://gmatclub.com/forum/the-idea-behi ... 98990.html
chkd the above link says D as OA....
but somewhere i read never doubt official answers, if u r doing so then u utilising 0% of your time..
guess i l go with official OA- A.....

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by nitingoel » Thu May 31, 2012 6:07 am
I would go with[spoiler] (A)[/spoiler] too.

B - passive voice
C - pasisve voice
D - "a (half) dozen" should be followed by a singular usage
E - "a (half) dozen" should be followed by a singular usage

GMAT instructors, your views please.

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by Kasia@EconomistGMAT » Thu May 31, 2012 11:22 am
When we talk about amounts and quantities we usually use singular determiners, verbs and pronouns ( even if the noun is PLURAL).

e.g. Where IS that five dollars I lent you?

Twenty miles IS a long way to walk.

A half-dozen eggs IS enough to make a pie.
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by quriousaddict » Thu May 31, 2012 1:52 pm
[quote="karthikpandian19"]The idea behind the Personal Long Letter campaign is that a single impassioned constituent may sway a lawmaker's opinion, whereas [u]a half-dozen banded together only causes him alarm[/u].

a half-dozen banded together only causes him alarm
only alarm is caused by a half-dozen banded together
only alarm has been caused by a half-dozen banded together
a half-dozen banded together only cause him alarm
a half-dozen have caused him only alarm when banded together[/quote]

IMO B
A & D & E- pronoun issue - what is the "him" referring to?
C - "has been caused by" is not parallel with "may sway"

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by sam2304 » Thu May 31, 2012 8:17 pm
jimmyjimmy wrote: chkd the above link says D as OA....
but somewhere i read never doubt official answers, if u r doing so then u utilising 0% of your time..
guess i l go with official OA- A.....
It never says D as the OA. The OA is indeed A, but the expert has clarified why D is better than A.
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by dhonu121 » Thu May 31, 2012 10:50 pm
Isn't there a pronoun reference problem as well.
We have lawmaker's earlier and then we have him.
Can him refer to lawmaker's ?

If we were to use a pronoun to refer to lawmaker's, shouldn't we be using his ?
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by jimmyjimmy » Fri Jun 01, 2012 9:32 am
sam2304 wrote:
jimmyjimmy wrote: chkd the above link says D as OA....
but somewhere i read never doubt official answers, if u r doing so then u utilising 0% of your time..
guess i l go with official OA- A.....
It never says D as the OA. The OA is indeed A, but the expert has clarified why D is better than A.
sorry boss..,.,.

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