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The steel industry has changed radically over the last two decades, as large, integrated companies
such as Bethlehem Steel once conducted operations from mining at one end of the process to
shipping at the other have greatly downsized, or in some cases shut down altogether.
A. as large, integrated companies such as Bethlehem Steel
B. as large, integrated companies, such as Bethlehem Steel, that
C. with large, integrated companies, such as Bethlehem Steel, that
D. while large, integrated companies, such as Bethlehem Steel, that
E. and large, integrated companies such as Bethlehem Steel


my doubt - ,+that , is acceptable ??
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by hemant_rajput » Mon Apr 01, 2013 10:42 am
varun289 wrote:The steel industry has changed radically over the last two decades, as large, integrated companies
such as Bethlehem Steel once conducted operations from mining at one end of the process to
shipping at the other have greatly downsized, or in some cases shut down altogether.
A. as large, integrated companies such as Bethlehem Steel
B. as large, integrated companies, such as Bethlehem Steel, that
C. with large, integrated companies, such as Bethlehem Steel, that
D. while large, integrated companies, such as Bethlehem Steel, that
E. and large, integrated companies such as Bethlehem Steel


my doubt - ,+that , is acceptable ??

I think that is required to emphasize the operations of Bethlehem steel industry.

My pick is B, what is OA?
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by srcc25anu » Mon Apr 01, 2013 2:02 pm
I would go with B

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by aditya8062 » Mon Apr 01, 2013 6:44 pm
B it is

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by Lifetron » Mon Apr 01, 2013 9:11 pm
IMO B

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by varun289 » Mon Apr 01, 2013 10:52 pm
ans is B only but my question can we use comma + that


its treat objectionable in gmat ??? is it ?

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by aditya8062 » Mon Apr 01, 2013 10:57 pm
its treat objectionable in gmat ??? is it ?
thats not correct !!

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