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by finance » Mon Aug 15, 2011 1:38 pm
Although India retained the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and its batting sustained any level of hostile bowling, its performance can plummet abysmally for no reason whatever.

India retained the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and its batting sustained any level of hostile bowling, its

India has retained the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and its batting has sustained any level of hostile bowling, its


Retaining the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and sustaining any level of hostile bowling in its batting, India's

Having retained the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and its batting having sustained any level of hostile bowling, India's

the World Test Match ranking in cricket was retained at the top by India and its batting was sustained any level of hostile bowling, India's
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by patanjali.purpose » Mon Aug 15, 2011 2:39 pm
finance wrote:Although India retained the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and its batting sustained any level of hostile bowling, its performance can plummet abysmally for no reason whatever.

India retained the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and its batting sustained any level of hostile bowling, its (past tense not compatible with the meaning)

India has retained the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and its batting has sustained any level of hostile bowling, its


Retaining the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and sustaining any level of hostile bowling in its batting, India's (who is retaining....India's)

Having retained the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and its batting having sustained any level of hostile bowling, India's (who is having....India's)

the World Test Match ranking in cricket was retained at the top by India and its batting was sustained any level of hostile bowling, India's (passive & incorrect tense usage)
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by jonathan123456 » Mon Aug 15, 2011 5:57 pm
finance wrote:Although India retained the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and its batting sustained any level of hostile bowling, its performance can plummet abysmally for no reason whatever.

India retained the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and its batting sustained any level of hostile bowling, its

India has retained the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and its batting has sustained any level of hostile bowling, its


Retaining the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and sustaining any level of hostile bowling in its batting, India's

Having retained the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and its batting having sustained any level of hostile bowling, India's

the World Test Match ranking in cricket was retained at the top by India and its batting was sustained any level of hostile bowling, India's
Is "Although" underlined too?

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by crick » Mon Aug 15, 2011 6:39 pm
B for me. Although should be out of underlined portion.

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by aspirant2011 » Mon Aug 15, 2011 6:54 pm
finance wrote:Although India retained the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and its batting sustained any level of hostile bowling, its performance can plummet abysmally for no reason whatever.

India retained the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and its batting sustained any level of hostile bowling, its ----- wrong use of simple past tense causes sentence to be unparallel with latter part of the sentence performance can plummet abysmally for no reason whatever.

India has retained the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and its batting has sustained any level of hostile bowling, its


Retaining the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and sustaining any level of hostile bowling in its batting, India's

Having retained the World Test Match ranking in cricket at the top and its batting having sustained any level of hostile bowling, India's

the World Test Match ranking in cricket was retained at the top by India and its batting was sustained any level of hostile bowling, India's

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