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amitabhprasad
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My question is which of the two is correct, this is not any GMAT question but was going through one article, keeping usage of participle in mind as I do have confusion on the usage of participle phrase vs clause. I wonder if both forms of usage are correct.
Environmental issues, including climate change, catapulted to the top of executives’ sociopolitical agendas in the previous survey and continue to gain prominence
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Environmental issues, which include climate change, catapulted to the top of executives’ sociopolitical agendas in the previous survey and continue to gain prominence
Environmental issues, including climate change, catapulted to the top of executives’ sociopolitical agendas in the previous survey and continue to gain prominence
or
Environmental issues, which include climate change, catapulted to the top of executives’ sociopolitical agendas in the previous survey and continue to gain prominence
