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Kiowa matriach

by garima99 » Thu Jun 23, 2011 7:21 pm
72. Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured the preparation of great quantities of ceremonial food, the wearing of many layers of colorful clothing adorned with silver, and the recounting of traditional tribal jokes and stories.
(A) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured
(B) Festivals were held in Aho, a Kiowa matriarch's home, which featured
(C) Aho, who was a Kiowa matriarch in her home, held festivals featuring
(D) In her home, Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals that featured
(E) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home that featured
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by vikram4689 » Thu Jun 23, 2011 7:49 pm
IMO D

(A) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured - RUN ON sentence
(B) Festivals were held in Aho, a Kiowa matriarch's home, which featured - festivals or home
(C) Aho, who was a Kiowa matriarch in her home, held festivals featuring
(D) In her home, Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals that featured - CORRECT, that refers to festivals
(E) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home that featured - home featured or festivals featured
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by garima99 » Thu Jun 23, 2011 7:54 pm
vikram4689 wrote:IMO D

(A) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured - RUN ON sentence
(B) Festivals were held in Aho, a Kiowa matriarch's home, which featured - festivals or home
(C) Aho, who was a Kiowa matriarch in her home, held festivals featuring
(D) In her home, Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals that featured - CORRECT, that refers to festivals
(E) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home that featured - home featured or festivals featured
Thanks,In B it is also changing the meaning.

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by vikram4689 » Thu Jun 23, 2011 8:36 pm
Yes, in B Aho is a home whereas in original sentence Aho is a lady
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