La Fruta del Diablo

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La Fruta del Diablo

by mangomangodolly » Sun Nov 25, 2012 1:32 am
La Fruta del Diablo, created by artist Patricia Rodriguez and her students, is based on the Chicano mural tradition, in which stories or historical events are told through large images typically painted on walls.

A. La Fruta del Diablo, created by artist Patricia Rodriguez and her students, is based on the Chicano mural tradition, in which stories or historical events are told through large images typically painted on walls.

B. Based on the Chicano mural tradition, in which stories or historical events are told through large images typically painted on walls, La Fruta del Diablo's creators were artist Patricia Rodriguez and her students.

C. Based on the Chicano mural tradition, which stories or historical events are told through large images typically painted on walls, artist Patricia Rodriguez and her students created La Fruta del Diablo.

D. La Fruta del Diablo was created by an artist, Patricia Rodriguez and her students, based on the Chicano mural tradition, in which stories or historical events are told through large images typically painted on walls.

E. An artist, Patricia Rodriguez, and her students created La Fruta del Diablo, in which stories or historical events typically painted on walls are told through large images, based on the Chicano mural tradition.
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by patanjali.purpose » Sun Nov 25, 2012 4:50 am
mangomangodolly wrote:La Fruta del Diablo, created by artist Patricia Rodriguez and her students, is based on the Chicano mural tradition, in which stories or historical events are told through large images typically painted on walls.

A. La Fruta del Diablo, created by artist Patricia Rodriguez and her students, is based on the Chicano mural tradition, in which stories or historical events are told through large images typically painted on walls.

B. Based on the Chicano mural tradition, in which stories or historical events are told through large images typically painted on walls, La Fruta del Diablo's creators were artist Patricia Rodriguez and her students.

C. Based on the Chicano mural tradition, which stories or historical events are told through large images typically painted on walls, artist Patricia Rodriguez and her students created La Fruta del Diablo.

D. La Fruta del Diablo was created by an artist, Patricia Rodriguez and her students, based on the Chicano mural tradition, in which stories or historical events are told through large images typically painted on walls.

E. An artist, Patricia Rodriguez, and her students created La Fruta del Diablo, in which stories or historical events typically painted on walls are told through large images, based on the Chicano mural tradition.
B - BASED ON modifies CREATORS
C - BASED ON modifies ARTIST
D - BASED ON modifies ARTIST (or Patricia Rodriguez and her students); second problem - an artist and Patricia Rodriguez are separated as if ARTIST is referring to both Patricia Rodriguez and her students)
E - BASED ON modifies IMAGES; sentence is a fragment (no main verb)
IMO A

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