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by loveusonu » Thu Jul 29, 2010 11:15 am
Regarded by analysts to be the result of tensions during the Cold War, the spy novel reached the zenith of its sales in the 1960s, when most Americans perceived the U.S.S.R. like a constant threat.

A. Regarded by analysts to be the result of tensions during the Cold War, the spy novel reached the zenith of its sales in the 1960s, when most Americans perceived the U.S.S.R. like a constant threat.

B. The spy novel, regarded by analysts to be the result of tensions during the Cold War, reached the zenith of its sales in the 1960s, when most Americans perceived the U.S.S.R. to be a constant threat.

C. Regarded by analysts as the result of tensions during the Cold War, in the 1960s the spy novel reached the zenith of its sales, when most Americans perceived the U.S.S.R. like a constant threat.

D. Reaching the zenith of its sales in the 1960s, the spy novel was regarded by analysts as the result of tensions during the Cold War, when most Americans perceived the U.S.S.R. as a constant threat.

E. Regarded by analysts as the result of tensions during the Cold War, sales of the spy novel reached their zenith in the 1960s, when most Americans perceived the U.S.S.R. as a constant threat.

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My doubt is why D is rejected. Got some links which says "Reaching the zenith of its sales in the 1960s" incorrectly modifying spy novel while ideally it should modify sales. However I feel "its" in the above adjective modifer, makes correctly pointing to spy novel and hence correct..Am I missing something modifying rule here??

Appreciate your help on this one..
Sonu
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by kvcpk » Thu Jul 29, 2010 11:22 am
In D, "the spy novel was regarded by analysts as the result of tensions" is wrong.
It is still regarded the same. Hence use of "was" which indicates past tense is incorrect.

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by clock60 » Thu Jul 29, 2010 11:36 am
in my very humble opinion, it is useless to find grammer, or modifier mistakes in D. the only one is meaning
D says
spy novel was regarded .......as a result of tentions,
but it is not spy novel, it is
increased sales of spy novel were regarded....as a result of tensions...

i think it is the only difference

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by loveusonu » Thu Jul 29, 2010 12:58 pm
clock60 wrote:in my very humble opinion, it is useless to find grammer, or modifier mistakes in D. the only one is meaning
D says
spy novel was regarded .......as a result of tentions,
but it is not spy novel, it is
increased sales of spy novel were regarded....as a result of tensions...

i think it is the only difference
Thanks, I was also on same lines and got confused..You made me monfident :)
Sonu
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